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Review of chapter "chapter 11" from SwimmieTeam
Review:
W-what?! That's it? you're just gonna leave it there? I knew Matt was in trouble the moment "Kyle" appeared. Update and tell us all that you were kidding!
Review By [SwimmieTeam] • Date [22 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter three" from (Recent Donor)Luna
Review:
Aw, I think this is really fun! I like the idea of happy Scoobies :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [14 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)Luna
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Oh well, that’s what being a Scrappy kid means.
--Too cute of an idea;their kids being the Scrappy Gang :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Luna] • Date [14 Apr 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter 11" from deathsjennesa
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I hope they can find Matt. And I hope you continue with this story. It is good so far.
Review By [deathsjennesa] • Date [23 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter 11" from CPTSkip
Review:
Wow! From apple pie to rancid maggot stew. Quiet a nasty change in the feel of your story. I just hope everything ends well.
Comments from author:
The Apple-Pie life....or something like it.
it's not always light and fluffy ;)
thanks for the review!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [31 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter 11" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Very nasty chapter! Good but nasty.

Wispr
Comments from author:
i know O.o
thanks for the review!
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [31 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter 9" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Yelp... trouble. Creepy chapter, very well done.


Wispr
Comments from author:
thanks!
glad you like it
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [25 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter 8" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Oh! I smell trouble ahead! Wish I had a cousin like that!

Wispr
Comments from author:
heh heh, the coolest people are often fictional; sucky huh?
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [25 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter 9" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Okay, so the apple pie life has a few worms in it, eh? Poor little Matt.
Comments from author:
yup, big fat icky worms

thanks for the review
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [25 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter 8" from CPTSkip
Review:
Lol! Sometimes the Dark Side is just so darn seductive, isn't it? I continue to enjoy the heck out of your story. Thanks again.
Comments from author:
To William it is, well he IS the son of Spike (:
glad you like the story
thanks for the review!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [21 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter seven" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
Review:
Very cute, doing a great job writing the children, their cute without being sickly sweet. Can't wait for more!

Wispr
Comments from author:
thanks,
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [9 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter seven" from CPTSkip
Review:
Your story is just so cute. I look forward to more.
Comments from author:
thanks
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [9 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter six" from RevDorothyL
Review:
I'm sorry to hear that Spike and Buffy are 'just friends' now, but I love it that they managed to create little William, and that he's looking out for the other children when some bullies need a butt-kicking (wearing the leather duster his dad gave him for his birthday, no less)!
Comments from author:
i never really like the Buffy/Spike pairing, it just grossed me out; still William's inherited Buffy's biting humor and Spike's sarcasm and ruthlessness. those bullies will difinately regret going after Matt.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [7 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter six" from CPTSkip
Review:
Yay! Jonathan still lives! You know, Jon and a deratted Amy would make a cute couple. Just saying. Wow! I am impressed with the quickly organized sleeping arrangements. It sounds like back when me and my siblings were all young and all our cousins came over for a sleep-in. Lots of chaos, but lots of fun, too with 13 or more kids. But you did hurt my feelings with: William now wondered whether or not uncle Andrew’s second child would be a geek, he hoped not. It must be odd for the man’s wife to be, currently, the only sane person in the family. Hey! We geeks are sane. We are just more enthusiastic about some odd things than most. Lol! Great story and I look forward to more.
Comments from author:
lol, i'm a geek too; William was just saying what HE thought; he's the kid of Spike and Buffy so it's kinda inevitable that he'd think like that.
i suppose it would've take longer with the sleeping arrangements, but you know Willow; she's pretty organised and usually thinks ahead
Yep, the only one of the 'Trio' to die was Warren, thank god; i hate that misogynous, perverted, psychopathic killer.

He now burns in Hellfire (:

Thanks for the review!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [6 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter five" from CPTSkip
Review:
You are so fast, you almost slipped this update by me. Lol! I can't wait to see a few bullies turned into rats. Ugly ones with feas. Just saying... Your story still just make me smile as I read it.
Comments from author:
the next one's about to be put up
yep, i always hated bullies; they'll definitely suffer (:
thanks for the review!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [5 Jul 08] • Not Rated
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