I admit that I like your style of writing, you are very good at description. Unfortunately rest of the story doesn't make a lot of sense. If Buffy is so rich that she can afford financing Yutani research, then why she is so so tempted by Weyland's check? Did i miss something? And why there is no magic anymore?

I hope u haven't forgotten about your fans please update soooon much love.
your #1 fan mimi

So damn good. The ending is so cliffhangery even though not that it's practically begging for a sequel. Hope you do write a sequel at some point, but anyway thanks so much for a great read. :)

Thats it? I'm disappointed that its not a full story. You left me hanging there.

A sequel to this wold be great!

Wow. I think you should turn this into a full story, at least 100,000 words. It is one of the best premises for a Buffy/Alien/Predator crossover I've ever read... 8)

This deserves a full story, great idea. This makes three stories in recent days I have read with good premise. I hope for more of all of them.

Credible translocation and good characterization, as usual. I admire the way you're able to drop your protagonists (Buffy) into the middle of a plot so seamlessly in all your short stories. We all know what comes next, so it doesn't have to be said.

I haven't seen AVP but this sounds like it might be interesting.

"“Tomorrow,” he said softly. “Tomorrow.”

Buffy stilled. Tried to breathe. Tried to clench her teeth against a gasp.

Tried to understand the sudden, unexpected terror that stabbed through her brain.

And for the first time in nearly three years, the Slayer moved beneath her skin."


---Oh! Oh oh oh! You have to write more of this story! *begs and pleads on knees* Please! So good; I love most of your stories but this one seems a little different than your others. The fact that Buffy remembers her life in Sunnydale before she was sucked into the AVP world is a detail I enjoy. (but her amnesia in your other stories is just as appealing when I read those)

I'm excited to read more of this story line. Please continue it!

Silly Buffy. Take the money, go to the meeting and then run. Run for your life! *grin*

WOOT! this looks really really REALLY amazing~! I hope you keep on posting!

I'm intrigued.

"And for the first time in nearly three years, the Slayer moved beneath her skin."

Very cool. Look forward to reading more hopefully soon

YES! Great update with some nice back-story and some very nice evil premonitions. So Buffy skipped universes? Bummer for her, great for us. And now she gets to fight both Aliens and Predators. The poor girl just can't get a break, can she. You write a great story and your setup is terrific. I so look forward to more of your story. I wonder if Buffy will eventually get adopted into the Predator clans? Lol!