Review of chapter "In which Dawn gets a new Dad" from
JoeHundredaireReview:
Your author notes are almost longer than your fic in this chapter...
Review By [
JoeHundredaire] • Date [30 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "In which Dawn explains things..." from
kyzhartReview:
I'm liking this so far. I love that you made Sev her Dad. Does she still have any of Buffy's blood? If not whose the mother? There is an error on chapter 3. At the bottom it should read brown hair and blue eyes to black hair and hazel (at least according to chapter 2).
Comments from author:
Thanks... where I am from you sometimes use green and hazel interchangeably, but I'll change it for you.
Review By [
kyzhart] • Date [11 Aug 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "In which Dawn gets a new Dad" from
JessReview:
This seems like a great story. I look forward to the rest of it when ever you can write it and post. *HUGS*
Review By [
Jess] • Date [14 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "New Beginnings" from
ShieldageReview:
Why do I see a dream sequence where Hogwarts' Dawn walks up to Sunnydale Dawn and slaps her? (:
Review By [
Shieldage] • Date [6 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "New Beginnings" from
IshikawaReview:
Interesting start, can't say much more yet, but i look forward to seeing more of this one. Definitely a story to keep track off.
Review By [
Ishikawa] • Date [6 Jul 08] • Not Rated
