great new chapter

Way more sympathetic and indepth a portrayal for these characters than I ever would have expected - thanks for writing & I'll be hanging out for the next installment.

Not sure if he could be trustworthy or not. Strikes me as being that way toward his family so far at least.

I believe the phrase for this situation is "truce but verify." : )

Hurray a new chapter. Now it's getting complex. And the fun question. Did she flat-line? I vote for yes. With the damage she took and the surgeries the hospital would have done. Her heart had to have stopped at least once even if it was medically induced.

I have some plans for that question, but there will only be answers at the appropriate time - no sense in dropping them in when it wouldn't make sense yet.

Dang it! You just "made" me spend nearly 3 hours re-reading this entire story. And I enjoyed it very much, until I looked at my clock and realized that it is 2:00 in the morning and my son has a doctor's appointment at 10:30 in the morning. I even had a whole bunch of comments to make, but seeing that I don't have even enough time left to sleep now just cleared all those thoughts right out of my head. :(

Sorry for the lack of sleep! I do hope things go well/get better with your son.

Delighted that you're (still) enjoying the story that much.

Excellent job so far. I love how you're taking it in a nice, original direction while still keeping the feel and cast compatible.

...especially given the cast you've set up. (Great job on Lorrie, by the way)

It's far too rare for me to find a story which engages me as well as this one does while simultaneously going off the beaten path this way. :)

Nice chapters.

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Glad of a new chapter. I've been waiting patiently. *grin*

still a great fic, but that last chapter was a bit low on the action wasn't it?

I'm really loving this story. Please keep up the good work.

And the giant mutant snapper is great.

Nice chapter.

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an all right chapter

i like the story. it's interresting to put secondary characters in a more central one.

Thank you.

I frequently find myself thinking that I'd like to know more about the non-title characters (Okay, the show's all about Buffy. What do Xander, Cordelia, Giles, Willow, or Joyce get up to when Buffy's not looking? What does Spike do all day? How about Drusilla?) or the less-focused on people (X-Men focusing on the original team? What's Mystique up to during this? Five issues focusing on the Jean-Scott-Emma thing? What are the students doing during all of this?)

Combine that with a) it would be really foolish to think that all possible disaster is only going to happen where & when the main hero can handle it (All possible apocali will not happen in Sunnydale for Buffy to handle or in New York for the X-Men to defeat.) and b) I despise the idea that there is no other possible way that things could not have fallen into DOOOM! other than the way it was written....

They won't react the same way as Buffy and/or the X-men. This could be a good thing. It'll certainly be something different to write about. Lots and lots of people write about Buffy saving the world or the primary X-Men defeating the evil and saving the world.

Why not let someone else have a chance to be the hero this time?

As always. Glad to see a new chapter to this story

I wonder if Erwin got turned or if his coffin contained something that they didn't want anybody to know about?

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