This was awesome! I loved it and I really do hope that you do a sequel? If you do is there any hope of getting notified for it? lol Either way I thoroughly enjoyed reading this, thank you for sharing!
Review By [chickaboo] • Date [16 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Hi Shezzi. I just finished it. Loved it, but I need more!!! Looking forward to the sequel. Dare I hope for a series? Submissive Dawn, Shang Da pairing. Your story is fresh and original. It ended all too soon :o) Your portrayal of the LA Gang was awesome. I'm eager to read more about them, too. Kudos!
Review By [TrueRedRose] • Date [15 Sep 08] • Not Rated
You took the easy way out but it at least has an ending and you didn't leave it hang so I won't be grumpy. Hope things are okay in RL :) ?
Later and Love Bunney
Comments from author:
You really think I copped out? It seemed...done. There'll be a sequel, I promise, but this one was just...finished. If you really want to blame someone, blame AllenPit, who encouraged me to think that I'd made cookies, not dough...hehehe.
Life's not too bad; I have a weeks holidays, my brother doesn't have to have any chemo for another week, it's pretty golden.
Are you planing a sequel to this at some point? It just seems like you ended it a little quick. Anyway, it's a great story and I do hope you continue it so I can find out what happens to Dawn now that she's locked into the key. As well as what happens between her and Shang Da. Plus, we still need to find out what Dolph is going to do! So now you simply must write a sequel. Pretty please?
Comments from author:
There will be a sequel, as stated in the author notes, that just felt...finished. I actually posted as incomplete and AllenPitt agreed that it seemed finished, so if you want to blame anyone, that's who you should be looking for! :) glad you liked it! thanks for the review! love xx Shezzi
Oh, you SO need to continue this! If only to include a few spats between the mystic duo. Bonding does not mean an end to all relationship problems and I can easily foresee issues if he ever tries to protect her from something she doesn't NEED protecting from... :D
^_^
Danke
Comments from author:
I will include some of those (not to mention just some 'getting to know you, not just staring dumbly into your eyes' time in the next installment....whenever it's inspired!) Glad you liked it, thanks for the review! love xx Shezzi
Review By [amusewithaview] • Date [29 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I enjoyed this story. However the ending seemed to come too soon - as in, it feels like came in the middle of the story. I'm glad you mentioned doing a sequel at some point in your Author's notes or I'd be seriously pissed. lol. Good job.
Comments from author:
It just felt finished to me, and for someone who has a really hard time finishing stories, I went with it...really, you should blame AllenPit, that's who told me to go for it! thanks for the review! love xx Shezzi
Review By [Scrappychic] • Date [29 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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