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Review of chapter "Chapter 10B" from JinaSolo
Review:
A very interesting story, and well written.

I wonder if Dawn is a Beta or an Omega. I kinda think that Dawn would by an Omega, in other not making a fuss about much unless she needs to. Not getting into dominance fights or anything, but...

Is there going to be a book two? You left things in an interesting place? What about Oz, is he an Ulfric?
Review By [JinaSolo] • Date [2 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10B" from leb
Review:
this was a great story, I would love to read more on what will happen now.
Review By [leb] • Date [28 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10B" from Vickzie
Review:
Looking 4ward to the next update
Review By [Vickzie] • Date [5 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10B" from AriaDragoncrest
Review:
Wonderful story
Review By [AriaDragoncrest] • Date [2 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10B" from (Current Donor)vladt
Review:
very good tale. thank you for the fun read. only flaw i would mention is too short. that is not a flaw in the writing. just my greed for more.
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [20 Dec 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10B" from Ansku
Review:
Sweet :)
Review By [Ansku] • Date [17 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10B" from chickaboo
Review:
This was awesome! I loved it and I really do hope that you do a sequel? If you do is there any hope of getting notified for it? lol Either way I thoroughly enjoyed reading this, thank you for sharing!
Review By [chickaboo] • Date [16 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10B" from Almadynis
Review:
LOVE THIS!!! Have you thought about a sequel?
Comments from author:
I have,but I'm not ready to start it yet. Kinda stuck over in NCIS ville at the moment. Glad you liked it! thanks for the review! love xx Shezzi
Review By [Almadynis] • Date [6 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10B" from TrueRedRose
Review:
Hi Shezzi. I just finished it. Loved it, but I need more!!! Looking forward to the sequel. Dare I hope for a series? Submissive Dawn, Shang Da pairing. Your story is fresh and original. It ended all too soon :o) Your portrayal of the LA Gang was awesome. I'm eager to read more about them, too. Kudos!
Review By [TrueRedRose] • Date [15 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10B" from Obsidian
Review:
I have to say VERY good story. Thank you.
ANd nice touch with Xanders pack perfect name.
Comments from author:
Thanks! Glad you liked it!
Review By [Obsidian] • Date [12 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from fanofkali
Review:
Good story.

Plenty of room for a sequel (subtle hint)
Review By [fanofkali] • Date [30 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10B" from Rosefighter
Review:
You ended it??? What about Dolph and everything else??? Please tell me there is more
Review By [Rosefighter] • Date [30 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10B" from Beth
Review:
*smiles*

Can't wait for the next update in this...
Review By [Beth] • Date [30 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10B" from Bunney
Review:
You took the easy way out but it at least has an ending and you didn't leave it hang so I won't be grumpy. Hope things are okay in RL :) ?

Later and Love
Bunney
Comments from author:
You really think I copped out? It seemed...done. There'll be a sequel, I promise, but this one was just...finished. If you really want to blame someone, blame AllenPit, who encouraged me to think that I'd made cookies, not dough...hehehe.

Life's not too bad; I have a weeks holidays, my brother doesn't have to have any chemo for another week, it's pretty golden.

Thanks for the review hunny! love xx Shezzi
Review By [Bunney] • Date [30 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10B" from Tempe
Review:
Are you planing a sequel to this at some point? It just seems like you ended it a little quick. Anyway, it's a great story and I do hope you continue it so I can find out what happens to Dawn now that she's locked into the key. As well as what happens between her and Shang Da. Plus, we still need to find out what Dolph is going to do! So now you simply must write a sequel. Pretty please?
Comments from author:
There will be a sequel, as stated in the author notes, that just felt...finished. I actually posted as incomplete and AllenPitt agreed that it seemed finished, so if you want to blame anyone, that's who you should be looking for! :) glad you liked it! thanks for the review! love xx Shezzi
Review By [Tempe] • Date [29 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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