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Review of chapter "Never Say the "W" Word" from firedrakegirl
Review:
This was interesting! It has a lot of potential. Please continue soon!
Review By [firedrakegirl] • Date [14 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Never Say the "W" Word" from AlecMcDowell
Review:
Man, this whole Pokemon crossover shouldn't be interesting... but it is! Too bad you lost your muse, I would've liked to see more of this
Review By [AlecMcDowell] • Date [10 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Never Say the "W" Word" from nemogbr
Review:
Good start. Please update some more.

It would be fascinating to see Pokemon in the Buffyverse.
Perhaps Xander has some pokemon friends for his girls?
Review By [nemogbr] • Date [10 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Never Say the "W" Word" from Bobboky
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very cool
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [9 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Never Say the "W" Word" from Nomma
Review:
Hehe. Sweeeeeeeet. Keep it goin', eh?
Review By [Nomma] • Date [28 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Never Say the "W" Word" from Sithicus
Review:
This looks to be a promising start, I am confused though by one thing. Doesn't Vulpix only have one tail and upon evolving into Ninetails develop the Nine Tails of her/his name? I've got like tons of Pokemon gameplay time and every Vulpix I've ever seen always had just the one tail if I'm not mistaken. Of course I could be mis-remembering.

Anyway, I would love to see this continued especially the girl's reactions to any and all cute looking Pokemon Xander has with him, I always thought Vulpix was a real cutie compared to Growlithe. I would suggest Xander doesn't have like all the starters from every game because not even Ash get's all the starters from a region except the Kanto region and Charizard and Squirtle and Bulbasaur all eventually leave him anyway. I wonder if he has any legendaries? I think unless he went to a place based more on the game then the anime they would be out of the question.

I think that's all I have to say on the matter, I look forward to more. Because I would love to see how the Buffyverse changes with Xander the Pokemon Master around to really play havoc on all the plans of the so called Big Bads.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.

As for Vulpix, according to the Pokedex, they're born with one tail, but the tail splits as they grow older. The only thing is that every sprite I've seen of Vulpix has three. As for his others, I'm still working on those and I keep changing my mind about which ones to use. I've been kinda busy and haven't really worked too much on the next chapter, but I'm trying ^_^
Review By [Sithicus] • Date [17 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Never Say the "W" Word" from APS
Review:
Cool story, hoping you'll add more soon.

Opinions are like assholes.
Everyone has one - but some just smell worse than others.
Review By [APS] • Date [13 Sep 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Never Say the "W" Word" from JediKnight
Review:
Nice start to the story, I'm hoping you'll add more soon.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm working on the next chapter but between school and my other stories, plus a Halloween story I've been working on for Halloween, I'm having a little trouble finding time to finish it.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [6 Sep 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Never Say the "W" Word" from SnakeFox
Review:
Cool story, hope there's more on the way soon ^_^
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing!

The next chapter is in progress, but I'm trying to balance writing three stories in progress, a Halloween story I'm saving for Halloween and school. Luckily my muse appears to have returned, so if I can find the time I'll get it done.
Review By [SnakeFox] • Date [16 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Never Say the "W" Word" from Jossalyn
Review:
I like it so update soon
Review By [Jossalyn] • Date [13 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Never Say the "W" Word" from banditobane
Review:
Nice! I like how made it very believable to pass for the BTVS. I've only seen a handful of BTVS episodes (My mom was Jehovah's Witness so sue me.) Xander has always been my favorite character because he just an average Joe. But now he got some serious back up. I'll admit I watched Pokemon for a while until my early teens so I'd like to see what other little monsters he has for back up. Or having an Onyx fight the mayor on graduation, but it's your story and you should decide. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing! Chapter two is in the works, but I'm having some major...I wouldn't exactly call it writer's block, but that's the only thing I can thing of to call it. Anyway, I hope you bear with me until I can motivate myself to get it done ^_^
Review By [banditobane] • Date [28 Jul 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Never Say the "W" Word" from darkmagician
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I think he needs a rival and I'd like to volunteer! I'm the Eevee-lutionary trainer! My team consists of Leafeon, Glaceon, Umbreon, Espeon, Jolteon, and Vaporeon. I've got Eevee and Flareon in reserve, along with 5 non-Eevee Pokes: Honchkrow, Mismagius, Garchomp, Machamp, and Alakazam.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing, but any rivals Xander may have had will still be in the Pokemon world and I was planning on giving Xander some Eevee-lutions on his team (I haven't really decided which ones yet)
Review By [darkmagician] • Date [13 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Never Say the "W" Word" from slightlyeccentric
Review:
I didn't really enjoy the Pokemon show, but I did like this fic. I loved that Xander is still kinda nerdy even though he is older, growing his beard to look cool. : ) I enjoyed your detailed description of the ritual used to bring Xander home, I can't wait to see the Scoobies reactions to an older Xander.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I always thought Xander would still be nerdy no matter what, but I decided to make him a bit of fangirl bait appearance wise, but yeah, the Scoobies are going to very shocked to see him how he looks now.
Review By [slightlyeccentric] • Date [11 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Never Say the "W" Word" from animesam
Review:
i was wondering when someone would do this.

good job ;p
Comments from author:
Thanks! ^_^
Review By [animesam] • Date [10 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Never Say the "W" Word" from spaceman
Review:
It's a great start! Hope you write more chapters soon. I love it when my ideas are finally used!

If your looking for more Pokemon inspiration, I would suggest you read:
Pokemon Master by Ace Sanchez.
The ultimate in dark Pokemon fanfic!
http://members.iinet.net.au/~aceywacey/pokemon.htm
Pokemon 152 - ? 2000 by Shaun Garin
http://omnipheonixmon.tripod.com/mtcstudio/id1.html
A great multi crossover


Scary Thought
Xander in the Pokegirl world. I think there's an incomplete story on this site.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I saw the challenge, wrote the first part, then set it back for a few weeks. When I saw the site was challenging us to complete people's challenges, I saw the perfect oppurtunity to finish it. I had intended it to only be a few chapters long, but popular demand has made me decide to make it longer. I'll definitely check out those other fics.

Incidentally, I have a plot bunny for your Xander as Naraku for Halloween challenge (I don't recall the actual title), but I don't want too many stories going at the same time. I'll probably try to work on it bit by bit and see where it leads.
Review By [spaceman] • Date [10 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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