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serenityselena Review:
intriguing start.... hope you will continue the story ^_^
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serenityselena ] • Date [15 Sep 11] • Not Rated
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goldenspringtime Review:
Interesting start can't wait to see how it all ties in.
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goldenspringtime ] • Date [22 Jul 11] • Not Rated
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Genuka Review:
Not bad so far... an update would be nice.
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Genuka ] • Date [12 May 10] • Not Rated
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Morgomir Review:
It's a great start. Keep up the good work.
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Morgomir ] • Date [15 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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DeepBlueJoyReview:
interesting start. are you gonna finish it? hope you do! Blue
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DeepBlueJoy] • Date [7 Jan 09] • Not Rated
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PsychoWing Review:
You know, I think this is the first story I've read where Tony wasn't the boozer. It's a nice change of pace. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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PsychoWing ] • Date [2 Jan 09] • Not Rated
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Elleria Review:
Please more?
Review By [
Elleria ] • Date [21 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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spring Review:
Okay these two chapters are good so far however the second is a bit confusing. Please update again soon.
Review By [
spring ] • Date [13 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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Bluejello Review:
Jacob in Sunnyhell? This could be interesting...
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Bluejello ] • Date [2 Oct 08] • Not Rated
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mayoi Review:
hm... more?
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mayoi ] • Date [5 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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JediKnight Review:
nice start, please add more.
Review By [
JediKnight ] • Date [31 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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dugleikoo Review:
I like it.
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dugleikoo ] • Date [29 Jul 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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Caliadragon Review:
This was a great chapter. I loved the characterization of Jacob and I look forward to seeing what will happen next. Thanks Calia
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Caliadragon ] • Date [22 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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samarakerina Review:
Another great chapter. I could see Jacob really hating commercial flights. :) Is he looking for Xander because o his cancer? I'm guessing Xander is one of Sam's mistakes before joining the USAF.... Looking forward for more! :D
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samarakerina ] • Date [22 Jul 08] • Not Rated
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oneeyedwitch Review:
It sounds interesting, and I hope you post more soon. I really want to know how he is related to Jacob Carter.
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oneeyedwitch ] • Date [14 Jul 08] • Not Rated