Your descriptions are very vivid and detailed, you can build suspense and mystery - we know who that woman is, but our characters don't, what Romulans wanted, how Buffy ended up in space and if she ever regain her memory, what will happen to her etc. ??? Enough to say you get me hooked, I want to read more, to know the answers. And you really put effort into showing us how Klingon culture look like - as a Trekkie I salute you! And Buffy found new daddy? That's nice, especially considering that her own father didn't care for her and he pretty much abandoned her. And knowing that Buffy is hurt, injured and in need of help, you build my sympathy towards sick person - natural reaction I guess.
So why I only give this story 8 out of 10? I wait for character development - for now Buffy was just a little mentally impaired, so there is not much personality there, and most of the Klingons - maybe, except of captain - were pretty generic Klingon warriors. Overall I treat this as pilot show - interesting start, but there is room for improvement.
Review By [EarlGrey] • Date [23 Jan 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Finally searched and found out that 'Suvwi' is the Klingon word for 'Warrior'. :) Have read this entire fic many times already, and can't get enough of it. Looking forward to whensoever you start the next instalment in the 'Suvwi' series. Thanks for writing this one. :)
Review By [leelaa] • Date [10 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
thank you for adding a glossary for the words in the last chapter, though there were some words I wish you had included. I am enjoying this and am looking forward to see what happens next.
Review By [FireDragon] • Date [9 Nov 12] • Not Rated
I -really- liked this story. I've not read any like it before, and I look forward to more. You totally captured the Klingon mindset and every character was 100 percent believable. Excellent stuff.
Review By [Listener] • Date [8 Nov 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
i've never really watched star trek and all i know about it pretty much comes from osmosis of pop culture references, though i did see the newest movie. but in spite of my lack of knowledge of the canon and my previous lack of interest this genre, you sucked straight into the plot!
i am wicked excited for the sequel. i have so many questions i can't wait to see answered! like, does buffy have any family left? if she doesn't, will she stay with haragga? and since she's been proven not to be an augment (i had to look that word up), will haragga become more curious about what she is? does he maybe try to get info on slayers in human history? is there any info, even myth, left? also, i'm betting (and hoping) captain stiff-uppper-lip will start getting closer to buffy. it'd be hard not to get a little attached. he's basically the guardian of a baby, a fast developing one sure, but still currently a baby.
anyhoo, rant over. i can't wait for the first chapter of the sequel!!!
Review By [GypsyWitch] • Date [8 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]