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Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from Aista
Review:
So cute! I can't resist Klingons.
Review By [Aista] • Date [24 Oct 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from (Recent Donor)christytrekkie
Review:
Loved this.
Review By [(Recent Donor)christytrekkie] • Date [3 Mar 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from EarlGrey
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Let me say one thing Sir, you are a good writer!

Your descriptions are very vivid and detailed, you can build suspense and mystery - we know who that woman is, but our characters don't, what Romulans wanted, how Buffy ended up in space and if she ever regain her memory, what will happen to her etc. ??? Enough to say you get me hooked, I want to read more, to know the answers. And you really put effort into showing us how Klingon culture look like - as a Trekkie I salute you! And Buffy found new daddy? That's nice, especially considering that her own father didn't care for her and he pretty much abandoned her. And knowing that Buffy is hurt, injured and in need of help, you build my sympathy towards sick person - natural reaction I guess.

So why I only give this story 8 out of 10? I wait for character development - for now Buffy was just a little mentally impaired, so there is not much personality there, and most of the Klingons - maybe, except of captain - were pretty generic Klingon warriors. Overall I treat this as pilot show - interesting start, but there is room for improvement.
Review By [EarlGrey] • Date [23 Jan 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from leelaa
Review:
Finally searched and found out that 'Suvwi' is the Klingon word for 'Warrior'. :)
Have read this entire fic many times already, and can't get enough of it. Looking forward to whensoever you start the next instalment in the 'Suvwi' series. Thanks for writing this one. :)
Review By [leelaa] • Date [10 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from (Current Donor)Feynor
Review:
Please create a series and add the story to it, that way we'll be told when you update the series :)
Review By [(Current Donor)Feynor] • Date [9 Nov 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
Review:
thank you for adding a glossary for the words in the last chapter, though there were some words I wish you had included. I am enjoying this and am looking forward to see what happens next.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [9 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from (Current Donor)vladt
Review:
really entertaining read, thank you.
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [8 Nov 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from (Current Donor)Listener
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I -really- liked this story. I've not read any like it before, and I look forward to more. You totally captured the Klingon mindset and every character was 100 percent believable. Excellent stuff.
Review By [(Current Donor)Listener] • Date [8 Nov 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from alynambered
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A cliffie AND the end of this story. It's promising to see more is planned.

I am enjoying this greatly and hope you've planned Buffy's backstory to appear somewhere??

For the curious, found this:
https://sites.google.com/a/klingonword.org/klv/klingon-translator-and-dictionary
This program will search Vulcan, Klingon or Romulan dictionaries

Oops:
I have been accessing our the Enclave's database, - lose the our
Review By [alynambered] • Date [8 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from GypsyWitch
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i've never really watched star trek and all i know about it pretty much comes from osmosis of pop culture references, though i did see the newest movie. but in spite of my lack of knowledge of the canon and my previous lack of interest this genre, you sucked straight into the plot!

i am wicked excited for the sequel. i have so many questions i can't wait to see answered! like, does buffy have any family left? if she doesn't, will she stay with haragga? and since she's been proven not to be an augment (i had to look that word up), will haragga become more curious about what she is? does he maybe try to get info on slayers in human history? is there any info, even myth, left? also, i'm betting (and hoping) captain stiff-uppper-lip will start getting closer to buffy. it'd be hard not to get a little attached. he's basically the guardian of a baby, a fast developing one sure, but still currently a baby.

anyhoo, rant over. i can't wait for the first chapter of the sequel!!!
Review By [GypsyWitch] • Date [8 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from AllegraCousland
Review:
LOOVED, this story! Am truly eager and excited for the next installments!

~Cheers~
Review By [AllegraCousland] • Date [8 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from ThePowerPanda
Review:
Very excited about this story and I look forward to the next part of the series!
Review By [ThePowerPanda] • Date [8 Nov 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from thewrongalice
Review:
This is excellent. Looking forward to next in the series! :-)
Review By [thewrongalice] • Date [7 Nov 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from AndreaMaine
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I've loved this story and I can't wait for the next part.
Review By [AndreaMaine] • Date [7 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from PATM
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The developing interactions is getting even more fascinating, galaxy wide stakes are the best kind of story. Buffy doesn't play it safe I bet.
Review By [PATM] • Date [7 Nov 12] • Not Rated
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