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Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
nice story so far and it was nice to read, but your blackmailing for reviews for other story's is kinda a turn off.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [12 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Drusilla
i wuldn't mind a little FD mixed in here!
Review By [Drusilla] • Date [7 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from TheDon
i hope you have their ages right. i think Harry would be atleast a year or two older than Xander and i think Xander is the oldest scooby there except maybe Oz. so since Faith is like 17 in your fic Harry should be about 19 maybe 20.
Comments from author:
Yeah. In a comment to another reviewer asking what age Faith was, I explained that she is 17 and so Harry would be 19 because his birthday is in July and it's currently May because of graduation at home in Sunnyhell.
Review By [TheDon] • Date [1 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Vanir
Interestingly enough, this is a review to tell you that i won't review. Now, aside from chapters shorter than many author's notes, you have a pretty good concept here. So far, you've written half a prologue though, so it's way too soon to tell.
Unfortunately, your production looks like half-baked notes. Take your time, make the effort and soon, you won't have to whore for reviews. Damn, that's annoying. Nothing screams "incompetent" like demanding reviews for updates. It's beyond pathetic. If you write what people want, the reviews will come You can also move to ficwad where most people get them.
Comments from author:
I know! Actually, I kinda started this as a side project because I have writer's block for my other story, but since so many people seem to like it, I'm going to rewrite it and actually take the time to make this good.

I'm also rewriting "Summers to Fear" as well.

Now, I know that you probably won't read this because "this is a review to tell me you won't review"

So if you ever DO read my author comment, I win!
Review By [Vanir] • Date [16 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Tpel
Really good story so far... chapters are a bit short, but I'm not really complaining.
Comments from author:
Yeah. I'm completely making the story up spur of the moment as I write it, and when I do that the chapters tend to be a bit short. Since I have absolutely no idea where this is headed, I might just pose some sort of question as to what should happen next at the end of each chapter, see what people say, and base my decision of that.

Toodles -
Review By [Tpel] • Date [11 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from AllenPitt
10 reviews of the other story? Ok! .......
* I think Draco will make a run for the hills, to be honest. Not the bravest guy at Hogwarts. And spend the rest of his life wishing he hadn't. Heh. Or, they get started and Narcissa comes out. I can't believe she'd leave them alone when he's her precious little Dracy-poo and she's a hired assassin. It's not like they've got a spare heir.
You're capturing what Faith was like at that point in her life really well.

Faith is probably going to be real surprised seeing where this Harry guy lives (probably expects another mansion & servants etc. Might remind her too much of her own childhood when she sees what his life is like---
Comments from author:
Thank you!

So far we have 1 save for Harry, 1 Draco runs away, and 1 they start and Narcissa comes out.

I'll think I'll do the Narcissa comes out one unless I get any better suggestions.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [9 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Jarvey
Save for Harry!
Review By [Jarvey] • Date [9 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Alucard
I gave you a 8/10 for chapter two. I always liked Faith. She was cool evil and cool as a good guy. I think it was the fact she never took any crap from anyone. I really can see her killing the Malforys just for shits and giggles.
Review By [Alucard] • Date [3 Aug 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from toowhiteprincess
Don't make her say with them any longer then she has to stay. Faith is going to be so bored.
Review By [toowhiteprincess] • Date [29 Jul 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from toowhiteprincess
Ok. Why do you want to toarcher Faith my making her go near Malfoy? I love this story, so far.
Comments from author:
Because, in my world, every good story needs a little idiot in it. And here, the idiots are the Malfoys.
Review By [toowhiteprincess] • Date [29 Jul 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Emeraldfire
ok, this should be interesting!!!
Review By [Emeraldfire] • Date [20 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Jarvey
Keep up the good work!
Review By [Jarvey] • Date [19 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from AllenPitt
so...the blood wards only cover against magic folk, not muggles? At worst she could just wait for him to come outside for the mail or something, I suppose... (maybe Malfoy assumes that as a non-witch, the wards won't cover her? Of course a slayer might be magical, to the wards...)
Hm...if she spends time observing, she'll see how the Dursleys treat him, and that might bring back memories of her own childhood.
* I have to ask, did Lucius notice the dead cabbie at his doorstep?. That could be embarrassing for him, if found by a neighbor or passerby....he'd have to dispose of it quickly. On the one hand he'd be cursing Faith for it, on the other, it'd be proof she's ok with killing etc, so he won't suspect any change of heart on her part.
Comments from author:
Umm... blood wards? (Please excuse my ignorance)

Harry doesn't live with the Dursleys anymore cause he's 19. He lives at Grimmauld Place and the only thing on it is the thing that means you have to see a piece of paper before you can go in or whatever.

And to answer your question, Lucius did notice the dead cabbie on his doorstep, so he had like, a houself or something clean it up. And the way I picture Malfoy Mansion is a really long driveway, so no neighbors would notice the dead body unless they were trespassing.

And I guess that Lucius wouldn't be too upset that Faith killed her cabbie. In truth, I didn't really give it that much thought. I just wanted someone Faith could kill without anyone getting too upset.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [19 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from NeilDingley
Good to know someones taken up the challenge, can't wait to read more, I'm curious to see what type of Harry you will have Dark Independent Harry, Superpower-full Harry Or Cheeky Bugger Harry who always seems to come out on top (which could annoy Faith as she likes to be on top! :-) )

Again, Looking foreword to more, keep on writing :-)
Comments from author:
Thanks. I am definitely looking forward to writing more.
Review By [NeilDingley] • Date [11 Jul 08] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1" from JediKnight
Interesting so far. please add more.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [11 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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