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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from GundumM
Review:
it's not bad but i just didn't care for it
Comments from author:
Um...I'm sorry?
Review By [GundumM] • Date [15 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from YademosEbyam
Review:
Perfect! This sort of "angel unawares" type story has always made me smile (one of the reasons I liked JoA so much). I'm not sure if you should add that note about Joan reminding her of an old friend from Sunnydale; it wouldn't really enhance the story that much (except for the real trivia buffs) and might distract from the flow as readers try to place the reference. At the very least an author's note would be required to explain it for non-JoA/Amber Tamblyn fans. Maybe in a later sequel "Summer" can encounter that piece of her past, and make the connection then.
Comments from author:
I think I might actually write an epilogue at some point, so if it went anywhere it'd be there, heh. I'm glad you liked it though, I like the 'angel unawares' things too; makes it almost seem like the universe has some sense to it :)
Review By [YademosEbyam] • Date [14 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)DonSample
Review:
My one thought was that Summer should have thought that Joan looked a lot like her old friend Janice from Sunnydale. Both played by Amber Tamblyn.
Comments from author:
Oh wow I totally forgot about that episode! Hmmm mebbe I'll go back in and add a note about that :-D *ponders*
Review By [(Past Donor)DonSample] • Date [13 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Review:
Excellent story. You captured the spirit of JoA perfectly. God *pun intended* I miss that show.
Comments from author:
Thank you! I'm so glad Joan didn't seem too ooc...I'd never really written her before so I just kept watching season one episodes, trying to get her voice in my head :-D Glad you liked it!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [13 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Daeth
Review:
Lovely. Simply lovely.
Comments from author:
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :)
Review By [Daeth] • Date [13 Jul 08] • Not Rated
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