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Review of chapter "The Wheels on the Bus..." from ClumsyElf
Review:
Great story!! Hope to see more soon!!

SARAH
Review By [ClumsyElf] • Date [28 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Wheels on the Bus..." from nemogbr
Review:
Great start.

Reading two of your series now...lol

Hope you update again soon.
Review By [nemogbr] • Date [8 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Wheels on the Bus..." from Sylven
Review:
This is fairly useless as a review but "Nooooooooooooooooooooooo... Simon must go with Buffy!"

Alright, now that I've gotten that bit out of the way, I've enjoyed your writings (which at this moment include this story and the two Star Wars Crossovers). I've enjoyed them a great deal. Its a very clean style of writing with minimum nonsense that doesn't add to some aspect of the story which these days. I appreciate that neatness more and more as I read fan fiction and as I realize I lack that same neatness on my own. Other than that, I'm probably going to go back and re-read everything again! Thanks for taking the time to write these stories and posting them for the rest of us. We appreciate it!

Regards,
C.C.
Comments from author:
I really appreciate that. Thank you. :)
Review By [Sylven] • Date [22 Feb 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Wheels on the Bus..." from PunctualGodot
Review:
I'm loving where this is going. I have read plenty of stories that put the Scoobies in the Firefly/Serenity storyline but this is my first that does it the other way around. Excellent writing skills and you have the characters down. I look forward to more!
Review By [PunctualGodot] • Date [29 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Wheels on the Bus..." from (Past Donor)zephyrRS
Review:
Interesting start. I hope you take it somewhere intriguing.
Comments from author:
The sequel to my other story is my main wip right now, but as soon as that one starts cranking out, I'll get back to this and help the Scoobies and the Serenity crew get to know one another a bit better. Thanks for reviewing!
Review By [(Past Donor)zephyrRS] • Date [7 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Wheels on the Bus..." from shelimar
Review:
i like the way it's going so far, but i've got a few questions i'm hoping you'll answer. for one please tell me robin and faith is not gonna be together in this fic. i just don't think they'd make a good couple. i'm kinda hopin for a jayne/faith or mal/faith. and i think i already know who buffy has her eye on (simon). now if i'm wrong about the pairing please let me know.

I really wanna know what the pairings are.
Comments from author:
I'm not actually sure of any of the pairings. Sorry for the mystery. Thanks for your interest! :)
Review By [shelimar] • Date [1 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Wheels on the Bus..." from Zombiegirl
Review:
Loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! A most execellent start. Looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thank you!!
Review By [Zombiegirl] • Date [29 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Wheels on the Bus..." from tosca
Review:
Great start. I like your Simon and Buffy interaction especially. :-)
Comments from author:
Good! Thanks for reviewing!
Review By [tosca] • Date [29 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Wheels on the Bus..." from silentflux
Review:
This is so much fun :) I loved your characterizations of everyone and their interactions were wonderfully spot-on. Can't wait to see more of this!
Comments from author:
Thanks!! :)
Review By [silentflux] • Date [29 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Wheels on the Bus..." from RevDorothyL
Review:
Hee! I love Buffy's 'evil' plan for Faith and Cleveland, and Faith's 'evil' plans for poor Simon (though once she finds out how Kaylee feels about him, I suspect she'll back off -- maybe she can spar with Jayne to work off her excess tension, instead?).
Comments from author:
lol, maybe. ;) Thanks for the review!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [29 Jul 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Wheels on the Bus..." from YademosEbyam
Review:
Okay, I like the interaction so far. The Scoobies and neo-slayers are still in crisis mode, and will continue to be so until their wounded can be treated. Dealing with the time travelers is something that will have to be put off until then. It's nice to hear from Mal that some sci-fi movie classics survived. (Although it might not be too well known; otherwise someone on the crew would have mentioned the occupational resemblance of their beloved leader to a certain handsome nerf herder ;)) If they are headed to L.A. and Angel gets a look at Zoe, things could get very ... interesting. Some points to ponder;

1.) According to the official Serenity RPG, the key "impossible" tech of the Firefly 'verse is gravitic control; contra-gravity screens that let anything fly, gravitic compressors used in compact fusion reactors, artificial gravity units used both on spacecraft and on terraformed moons to contain their atmosphere, etc.. The actual mechanics of the tech is apparently simple enough to understand that a young woman with little formal education can keep an underfunded freighter depending on it In-the-Black. This implies that the science behind it may be equally simple, and could involve some clever "trick" that might be exploitable with current technology. If so, Serenity's crew may have a very salable commodity at their disposal.

2.) The crew of Serenity has a decision to make; whether to try to go home where they are wanted fugitives, or remain on the Earth-that-Is where they have clean slates. Each person will have their own priorities, and not all of them may make the same choice. A key element will be how soon until the Earth-that-Is becomes the Earth-that-Was, if there is anything that can be done about that, and whether they should. (Sometimes for the fledgling to fly, you have to kick it out of the nest.)

3.) Buffy and friends are going to have their hands full setting up the New Watcher's Council. Why, when and how would they find time to help the new arrivals?
Comments from author:
Mal was actually just saying 'in a galaxy far far away,' he wasn't intending to make the SW reference that Andrew jumped at. I have this story loosely (key on the loose) mapped out in my head with a general plot and even a possible sequel. I do like your idea of them using their future 'techy' knowledge to make a living while they're visiting. If I can incorporate that, I might. As far as #2, didn't Earth become ETW a couple hundred years into the future? #3: The new arrivals will, as pointed out through #1 due to their unique expertise prove themselves useful to the Slayer and her fledgling Council. Thanks for all the input, I really enjoyed it! :)
Review By [YademosEbyam] • Date [29 Jul 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Wheels on the Bus..." from ArjaiH
Review:
This is proceeding nicely. I realize that you are setting the stage for future developments and thus have to move slowly at first, but the pace is well thought out and correct for this stage of the story. You write well, and have a good handle on characterization. Excellent!
Comments from author:
Thank you!! ^^
Review By [ArjaiH] • Date [29 Jul 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Wheels on the Bus..." from SpinelessPunster
Review:
Excellent beginning. Characters are about spot on, as well.

A very hard crossover to bring into novel-length, OMO

Good luck, keep writing!
Comments from author:
It is turning into a bit of a challenge.. Thanks for the review! :)
Review By [SpinelessPunster] • Date [29 Jul 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Welcome to the Hellmouth" from SaltoftheEarth
Review:
Heh, Wash is awesome. I'm really interested in how this turns out. Most of the fics I've read have someone from the Buffyverse land on Serenity, can't wait to see now that the Firefly mob are on Earth!
Comments from author:
Thanks! I never actually considered doing it this way until I read that challenge, I think it's easier somehow to move BtvS characters over to Firefly than visa-versa. Anyway, I appreciate the review! :)
Review By [SaltoftheEarth] • Date [28 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Welcome to the Hellmouth" from MercyJones
Review:
Only one chapter so far? Oh! And I was just getting into it! You must update soon! I can't wait to see some wacky Mal/Caleb and Xander and Wash fun!
Comments from author:
I'm probably not going to do much with the whole Nathan playing both parts thing. Hopefully there will still be lot's of other opportunities for fun! :) Thanks for reviewing!
Review By [MercyJones] • Date [15 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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