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Review of chapter "And in closing . . ." from DieselDriver
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Ok, that ending just cries for a sequel.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [18 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prophecy Girl Part III" from DieselDriver
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Heh, none of my comic books where even within 3 decades of being as new as yours. I stopped buying them in 1969 and sold them all for 2.5 cents apiece when I joined the Air Force. Collectable complete sets of fantastic four, Avengers, Thor, Spiderman, Iron Man, copies 1 through 101 was the smallest collection. I coulda been RICH!!! But I'm not. Bah Humbug. Who knew?
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [18 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Plans and Tests" from DieselDriver
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Is this master a STNG fanboy? er, Fanmonster? “Make it so!” Sounds like he's channeling Jean Luc Pickard.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [18 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Reaping" from DieselDriver
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Hey! We don't KNOW that she died, just that she faded away. Might she not have been removed to somewhere else by those pesky PTB's?
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [18 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Talent Show" from DieselDriver
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Interesting musings at the end of this one and I was thinking pretty much "wonder what's going on with the others right now?" earlier in the chapter. I also wonder if Xander will ever find out that his possession results in him having a child.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [18 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "First Outing" from DieselDriver
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Tranquilizer darts with holy water, Jonathon is pretty creative. That's an excellent idea. Way better than crossbows. Don't even have to hit the heart. At very least the vamp would have a hole eaten into it's body and the agony would probably disable it at the very least.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [18 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The New Team - Introductions" from DieselDriver
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Heh, the major character in a story NEEDS a name and you picked one that is "shiny". Oh wait, that's Firefly... Never mind.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [17 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Preparations" from DieselDriver
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I figured it out maybe 5 sentences before you did the big reveal. So what that means is that "Hale" is probably a reference to "Nathan Hale" and his speech at his execution.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [17 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Explanations" from DieselDriver
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Not a clue who Cee Cee is. Only Cee Cee I know of is the ditz that moved into Poe with Chou Over at Whately Acadamy. And I still don't get the significance of "Hale" is either.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [17 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Musings" from DieselDriver
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Willow is magical and will eventually be able to see or sense spirits. That would give away a lot and so she really needs to go. Perhaps she could go live with her three cousins in San Francisco. I'm sure they would be charmed to have her.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [17 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Preparing for Departure" from DieselDriver
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Good to see Willow actually thinking about something emotional instead of what she'd been doing. Perhaps she needed the shock as much as anyone. Hope she grows up now instead of being an overgrown child for the rest of her life.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [16 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "You Can Call Me Joe" from DieselDriver
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Ummm... What was the deal with the "Miss Hale"???
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [16 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Journey Interrupted" from FireWolfe
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Sorry it was xander and maybe not totally by choice but it was his decisions that lead to the place he was in. So yeah he did the deed.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [28 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "And in closing . . ." from Cdog
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Aw, it can't end like this. I was looking forward to seeing the girls reactions when they finally learned the truth about "The Essence" and who Joe really was.
Comments from author:
Sorry, but you'll have to wait for the sequel. The muse for this story is exhausted and needs to recharge.
Review By [Cdog] • Date [27 May 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "And in closing . . ." from Oxnate
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Well, I'm glad your muse let you finish this one off. Very entertaining.
Review By [Oxnate] • Date [26 May 14] • Not Rated
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