Seriously? You are just going to leave us with that? Bejeebas, that is cruel!
I really enjoyed reading this, and look forward to the rest of the story. I can't wait to see just what Cameron is referring to when she calls Buffy 'One'. I mean, it could be about her Slayer-ness or the fact that she was the first roboty thing sorta....
...Yeah...
So please update soon!!
Review By [Kaleidofox] • Date [20 Mar 11] • Not Rated
dude..this is soooo good!!! granted I only know 2 chapters worth of plot but so far its got me hooked!! thats a very good talent to have, not many authors have that ability to keep the reader on the edge of their seats. I hope you haven't abandoned this story, since the last update was in september. But I understand. Life has a tendency to get in the way. anyhhwayy...best of luck! I'll be looking forward to finding out what happens next.
Comments from author:
Thank you! Yes, I do intend to finish this. RL combined with a fickle muse has resulted in only half of a third chapter. Stay tuned and I'll post as soon as I have a decent chapter.
Review By [Cesia] • Date [26 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [22 Sep 08] • Not Rated
I actually couldn't remember who they were watching in the park but at any rate I loved the scene you set and the transition to Willow. The second ch didn't rewrite the second episode which I appreciate and it was fantastic in any case I'd care to make. What about Shirley Manson,cool job, eh?
Comments from author:
John and Derek had been watching young Kyle and young Derek in the park.
The graphic threw me a bit off kilter and I almost didn't read this fic, and no blame for the artist,just me. I'm sorry it took this long to find this fic you have got go on and send me more. The first sentence sent me to the park at the idyllic paradox moment John saw his younger self playing catch and the mumbling that caught Dereks ear was destiny. Thanks for a great first chapter.
Comments from author:
Sorry about the large size. It's fixed now. I just learned how to do that recently and hadn't realized I forgot about this post. The next chapter is almost done. I'm trying to get it done and beta'd by Friday, so cross your fingers.
morgyair
