Large PrintHandheldAudioRating
Twisting The Hellmouth Crossing Over Awards - Results
Rules for Challenges

A Fathers Love

StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Selonianth
... Buffy's reaction when she gets ressurected would be... what's the word I'm looking for... Apoplectic. Might be enough to completely shake off that little molecular sunburn she'll get right then and there.
Review By [Selonianth] • Date [3 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from DarthPayne
How did i miss this fic the first time? Will it be continued?
Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [15 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from serenityselena
interesting start...
hope you will continue the story ^_^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [6 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Letomo
I like this story. A nice view of why Hank disappeared from the show so completely. I hope you get inspired to continue it.
Review By [Letomo] • Date [26 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Vickzie
Cool story!
Review By [Vickzie] • Date [25 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from LeaFairy
This was an utterly fantastic beginning! I absolutely love the idea of who Hank really is (it's pretty darn original) and "why" he wasn't in Buffy and Dawn's lives (ie.. Joyce). I liked the interaction between him (Storm and Wolverine) and the Scoobies, and the small argument it all caused... It makes sense that the Scoobies wouldn't let Dawn go without a fight. I also I think you nailed Anya down perfectly.... I totally giggled over the whole spawn speech :)

Anyhoo, I really loved this start and I definitely hope to read more! Thanks for writing!!
Comments from author:
its one that has been in the back of my mind for a while and I have a lot of directions but when my hard drive committed suicide I lost so much of the things I'd been working on. I'm glad that you enjoyed my take on Anya because I do love her. I even through out a challenge that will likely never be touched on her behalf.
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [15 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from firedrakegirl
Oh! More please!! Love it! It's an unusual relationship. Usually its Scott, not Hank, but I can see it. Love the story!
Review By [firedrakegirl] • Date [8 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Chip
I really like this. It's new and unique. I do however want to see Spike meet the x-men. I can't see Dawn leaving without saying goodbye, she got really attached to him. Plus, Spike and Wolverine meeting is just always amusing. Update soon.
Review By [Chip] • Date [7 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from CrystalBlaze
This shows great potential.

Given the other Hank mentioned but not seen in the Buffy series, there's the dual options of it being a plant arranged by Joyce or someone impersonating Hank McCoy from a distance.

And, to be frank, for the chance of taking a strong and combat-adaptive seeming mutant and her younger sister (once the monks' spell retconned Dawn in) Mystique would do all that and more.

I might add; if Willow tried to revive Buffy, she would NOT get any support from the Slayer on this. Joyce Summers has major, major issues with change, and she kicked out Buffy during the climactic sequence of the Angelus/Acathla arc. No matter how traumatic and river-in-egypt that moment was for her, her subconscious may well carry the memory of the final fight between Joyce and Hank..

No, if Buffy has her carcass dragged back to life and her soul pulled back from Heaven, she's RATHER likely to go off on Willow with both barrels and RUN, not walk, to the Institute.
Comments from author:
You may not be aware of it, but you just answered questions buzzing through my head as well as feeding the ever-hungry plot bunny. Thanks
- Damia
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [15 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Morgomir
Great story. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [13 Jan 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from AriaDeloncray
Great story. Update soon.
Review By [AriaDeloncray] • Date [16 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from RevDorothyL
Trust Tara to side with Dawn (it's one of the things we loved about her)!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [18 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Dragonelf
::Gives the art plot bunny some carrot soup::

Don't kick the monster!
Program a robot to smash it,
Shoot it, Spear it or even
Throw something at it (preferably
a grenade), but NEVER kick the monster!
NOTE: does not apply to BLACK BELTS.
- Unknown
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [14 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from imafan
Really enjoying this, so far. I like that you went for a crossover relation with a common first name rather than a common last name. Interesting take.
I'm wondering whether or not you'll be making Dawn a mutant. You seemed to hint at it, but that could just be wishful thinking. Something built into the monks spell, perhaps?
Great work. Awaiting the next update.
Comments from author:
Still not sure whether Dawn will be a mutant or not. I mean theoretically she was created from Buffy, but if that were right than she would have been a potential slayer, at least to my thinking. So I've decided Dawn was created from the same genes that Buffy was, so if Buffy's father had the X-gene so would she since it's hereditary, even if it's not active. I'm kinda leaning towards a mutation, but then I wonder what if she was a normal girl at the institute? Or even just magically endowed?
I guess it'll come to me as I write.
- D
Review By [imafan] • Date [14 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from SlowMercury
So far, I like this story, and I definitely want to see where you take it next. I'm interested to see more of Dawn and Hank's interaction, as well as how she fits in at the Xavier Institute as the only non-superpowered person on the premises. If Buffy does get resurrected in this fic, I'm going to be interested in how she fits back into the family dynamic too.

I do think you're being a little harsh on the Scoobies, especially Willow. I'm not sure whether you're trying to say that Willow honestly is prejudiced (and as an aside, "prejudiced" is probably a better word to use than "racist" - they've got different connotations) or if you're trying to say that she's just using everything she can think of to try and keep Dawn. I think it's very out of character for her if she really does just hate mutants for no given reason. I do very much like your Anya. Her explanation of "spawn" is funny and probably a more accurate term for Dawn than most people realize.
Comments from author:
yeah, I'm trying to make Willow be positive that the best thing for Dawn is to stay in Sunnydale and as such come up with what she would assume are reasonable reasons that Dawn should stay. I haven't quite locked on how to do that obviously. I'm glad you like my Anya though, she was actually one of my favorites in the show and I think she's fun to write, although possibly one of the hardest.
- D
Review By [SlowMercury] • Date [13 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Page: 1 of 3 next end
StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking