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Brand New Day...For Evil

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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bugeyedmonster
Review:
yeah! She's not dead. And what with all the "people who aren't what they seem to be" in Dr H, Penny being part of the ELE fits in somehow.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I hadn't thought of it that way, but it does seem like the show had lots of people in the "secret identity club"...gonna have to ponder that one. I was mostly mad at being Jossed again, and this was my plug for FD.
Review By [Bugeyedmonster] • Date [19 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)Baladen
Review:
This was great, an almost perfect epilogue to the show. I could picture this as one of those scenes that plays after the credits when most of the theater is empty (like the Fury scene in Iron Man).
Comments from author:
I'm pleased you think this was a good fit with Dr. Horrible. I have a hard time balancing the comedy and drama, as I'm not a fan of tongue-in-cheek humor in general or musicals in particular. Definitely working at the edge of my comfort zone, here =)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Baladen] • Date [26 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JEHayes
Review:
A very clever idea and I felt the lyrics were excellently done.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the kind words. I was a little nervous at including the lyrics with this story; I felt they were good, not great (always room for improvement). But then again, some of the lyrics from Dr. Horrible were a little bit of a stretch.
Review By [JEHayes] • Date [25 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Twoboots
Review:
I love these! Write more!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the vote of confidence. I can't promise anything, but I'll keep my eyes open for inspiration.
Review By [Twoboots] • Date [24 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from enderverse
Review:
That line made me think she was going to turn out to be evil also, but I guess its like in Batman and The Joker everyone in that world has heard of all of the major villains.
Comments from author:
It was the only way I could rationalize Penny being saved...Don't take that from me (sniffle).

--You killed Penny. You bastard!
Review By [enderverse] • Date [24 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from rhymneyfaries
Review:
Hahaha, I love it! =D
Comments from author:
Bwhahaha. Ha. Mine is an evil laugh of evil. Glad you liked the deJossed ending =)
Review By [rhymneyfaries] • Date [24 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Scrappychic
Review:
Great Great GREAT!

“Bad Penny,” neighed the Thoroughbred of Sin, “I knew you’d turn up.”
- lol Priceless!

Great job. I can only hope that Joss & Jed see this and use the idea of Bad Penny in the next chapter of Dr. Horrible's saga.
Comments from author:
They're welcome to it...for the tune of one red cent ;)
(That's a song, folks. I'm not demanding money for what's not mine)

--I unkilled Penny. You bastard!
Review By [Scrappychic] • Date [24 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Hecatonchires
Review:
LOVED IT! Made me laugh and laugh and laugh. A link has to be sent to Joss's blog.
Comments from author:
Glad you appreciated it! And thanks (I think).
Review By [Hecatonchires] • Date [23 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Review:
Yay! Penny isn't dead! Boo! Penny is evil! Yay! I do like the idea of the Bad Doctor and the Bad Penny getting together and having some Bad Babies someday. Lol!
Comments from author:
I know what you mean...I'm conflicted, too. However, if their kids grow up evil they can have family crime syndicate with a catchy name, like the Horrible Change Gang (bad pun on, like, three different levels).
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [23 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)Ponder
Review:
*chortle* She keeps turning up! *LOL*

Minor copyedit note: The beginning word in every line of a song/poem should be capitalized.

EDIT: I goofed. It used to be a formal rule for poetry and songs, but since I've gotten out of school, it isn't as mandatory anymore.

*** Ponder
Comments from author:
Love my money...even if it's just one red cent.

Thanks for the proofing, as always. I'm going to call it 'artistic license' if it's not the normal form, 'cause it bugs me the other way.
Review By [(Past Donor)Ponder] • Date [23 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from axolotl
Review:
Glee! This was exactly the same idea my brother and I had at the end of the first episode because of when horrible says why here why now?, we were so disappointed to see her die but to twist even that *props!* Good work!
Comments from author:
A bunch of us must've gotten Jossed. I saw this very point ranted about by someone on the DHSAB forum or imdb or somewhere else. Got me thinking this morning, and viola.
Review By [axolotl] • Date [23 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from kalibex
Review:
Best Retcon Ever!
Comments from author:
Thank so much. I'm glad my lunch break was well spent.
Review By [kalibex] • Date [23 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Orion
Review:
Love Dr. Horrible, and I'm quite glad that Penny didn't die.

I do like this better than the South Park one. Hope to see more in the series.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the rapid review! It's not my normal style of fic--far too campy. However, if anything else comes to me I'll see what I can do.
Review By [Orion] • Date [23 Jul 08] • Not Rated
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