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Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Vickzie
Review:
Brilliant story so far. Hope you update more soon
Review By [Vickzie] • Date [29 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from BrownFinderth
Review:
It's been a good story to this point. Yet, I do wish the author had been able to continue writing!!!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [28 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from BrownFinderth
Review:
Intriguing concept of having an angel visit Tara to ask her for her help!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [28 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Raider
Review:
interesting story.

I'm interested in how tara met and was accepted by those people, and what happens next.
Review By [Raider] • Date [25 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Twoboots
Review:
Please, please, please continue this!
Review By [Twoboots] • Date [24 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Beth
Review:
I like...and I eagerly await the nexy update...
Review By [Beth] • Date [26 Aug 08] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Another very satisfying, gap-filling-in, and character-developing chapter!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [26 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Bobboky
Review:
good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [26 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from kaleecat
Review:
Well, I liked the original version just fine, but then I'm quite familiar with both shows. At the moment you've toned down the arrogance on the part of the SGA team and Rodney quite nicely. I think it was a good decision to weave in the Hoffan events as an example of the pitfalls of zealous science. I'll be interested to see how you get Tara to Atlantis this time.

Events are flowing well thus far.
Review By [kaleecat] • Date [25 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from asqwerth
Review:
It starts out much better than the original story. At least you explain how she got to that galaxy, and how come she doesn't really recognise some of the SGA gang as being from Earth.

One nitpick - why would she use the term "DNA"? And if she did, wouldn't the SGA crew pick up on it as an Earth term?
Review By [asqwerth] • Date [25 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Another very good chapter! I say again, your re-write is even better than the original and fills in some of the gaps in motivation or details that you didn't have time for in the previous version.

Nice work (both from you and your beta)!
Comments from author:
I wanted to work on fleshing out both the story and the characterization and I'm glad that it's noticed. Thank you!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [1 Aug 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from TombCranktheCrafty
Review:
I must admit, the re-write of "Come To Dust" is much better. The writing has improved, and it is much more coherent and concise. Good job!
Comments from author:
That was another thing I wanted to improve on... the other story wasn't exactly the most coherent and, if one wasn't exactly well-versed, one could get lost. It's a mistake I'm working to rectify, for sure. Thank you for reviewing!
Review By [TombCranktheCrafty] • Date [31 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Past Donor)Charlotte
Review:
I enjoyed the first version, but this is a vast improvement.

Good job.
Comments from author:
I'm actually glad to know that it can be seen as an improvement after exactly two chapters... music to this little writer's ears, for sure. Thanks. :)
Review By [(Past Donor)Charlotte] • Date [30 Jul 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from newt
Review:
i like all the little things you've added to this from the original. well done
Comments from author:
Why, thank you.
Review By [newt] • Date [30 Jul 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from RocksandGlass
Review:
This is coming along very nicely. I liked the original version of the story that you posted, but you have done very well with this re-write and it has definitely improved. I think the pace is a lot better and there is a high level of care with detail and characterizations that makes this a really good read, I'm looking forward to reading more.
Comments from author:
That was the one thing that I was a bit touched about, especially with some of the old story's reviews, was characterizations. It really is hard to write a character you really don't know much about. It is something I hoped to improve on and I'm glad I'm sort of going in the right direction.
Review By [RocksandGlass] • Date [30 Jul 08] • Not Rated
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