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Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from jgoodman
Review:
Love this story and can't wait to read more, please update
Comments from author:
Thanks. My muse is awakening again.
Review By [jgoodman] • Date [1 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from bliss
Review:
Daaaaammmnnn!! Okay, first I must tell you that normally I am not into slash, but I will not turn away a well written story. Your story is brilliant!! I love the humor and the broad use of British slang. A few scenes with Spike felt a little strange...maybe a little on the too fluffy side. But then again, back to my "not used to slash" thing, so perhaps it was just me. I do have to say I was more than impressed with the "love scenes" . Wow!! I found I was fanning myself a couple of times. Keep writing like that and you just might change my mind on the whole slash issue. .
So, all that said, hurry up and finish!! I am anxious to continue reading. And for all that is holy, what is the toy Clark bought Spike?? I simply must know!! Don't keep me in the dark too long!!
Please????
Comments from author:
Thank you.

I have not forgotten about this story. I have even began the next installment. Just drama etc and RL in the way. I will add more but I am not sure of the date yet. I might even add some interludes.

Oh. About being "too fluffy" sometimes but not all the time a person may do things out of character for their significant other. Yet, Spike is a "fool for love" or "love's b--".

Thank you for the compliment on British slang I surfed the net really hard for the right slang to add to my "Spike voice".
Review By [bliss] • Date [21 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from kayron
Review:
I'm guessing that the person spying on Clark might have been Lex's private investigater. Although, how he'd survive nights in SunnyD is a mystery. It's funny to think that gentle'afraid of his own strenght' Clark is the new 'big bad' of SunnyDale. Spike will get a real laugh out of that! Buffy must have had a real shock when her charms didn't work on Clark. I can just imagine her standing there mouth open and bug-eyed! I look forward to seeing how Clark reacts to Spike's story.
Comments from author:
OMG! I almost used those exact words "open and bug-eyed."

As for the voyeur, all I will say is that it could just be dum luck.

Clark's reaction to the reality of Sunnydale night life in light of his feelings for Spike is going to be a bit tricky.

Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [kayron] • Date [24 Sep 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from TouchoftheWind
Review:
I wonder if the person watching Clark was this detective Lex sent...or something else? Wonderful chapter!
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [24 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Alianna
Review:
Pretty Hot story! More please! :)
Comments from author:
Thank you. I'm thinking of doing some interludes for this fic.
Review By [Alianna] • Date [22 Sep 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from TouchoftheWind
Review:
Lex is investigating Spike...have a feeling that this will back-fire...push Clark closer to Spike...can't see them getting away with spying on the 'Big Bad'....

I think it should turn out that Clark becomes Immortal because of his origins...

Update soon!
Comments from author:
Possibly. I'm trying to do it now and my homework, etc.
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [21 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from kayron
Review:
Spike and Clark are so good together. They've told each other the basics of what they are, but they have a little more to go. Spike has to let Clark know about his past, and Clark is going to have to tell Spike about Lex because it seems that Lex might be coming to find Clark. He has already tracked Clark to Sunnydale.
Comments from author:
Yeah they can be so cute. I know they have some more telling to do. I'm trying to build on what has happened so far. I want things to progress more before start bringing everything together.
Review By [kayron] • Date [21 Sep 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from slytherinwithwings
Review:
"Spiiiiiike!" Very dramatic? I can has update?
FlyingSnake
Comments from author:
OK. Thanks. I plan to update sometime in May. It's in my head.
Review By [slytherinwithwings] • Date [9 Apr 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from slytherinwithwings
Review:
You should update this really, cause I want to see Spike come out as a Vampire to Clark and Clark come out as an alien to Spike, and Clark come out as gay to Lex. There is much coming out to do and can't be done until you update. Right? I think I just babbled.
FlyingSnake
Review By [slytherinwithwings] • Date [23 Dec 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from mayoi
Review:
cute!! and hot!!!
and enthralling!!

can't wait till the next part ^^
Comments from author:
Thanks. I have started on the next chapter. I plan to post maybe by Nov 30th or do a few mini chapters.
Review By [mayoi] • Date [8 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from DennSedai
Review:
Oh damn, Spike's secret is about to come bursting out of the spook closet, and I bet Clark's secret will end up following it as well. My oh my, how the accusations and such will fly. Still they are a lovely, even if unusual pairing.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the feedback. Yeah the secret-sharing will began but I won't spoil it by divulging how much how soon.
Review By [DennSedai] • Date [24 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Darkhime
Review:
Aww poor Clark is gonna think he killed Spike through sex,lol.Can't wait for the next update.
Comments from author:
I love feedback. Thanks. Yeah. I didn't want them to go all the way just yet because this story will not be a pwp but it will have a healthy dose of slashy goodness.
Review By [Darkhime] • Date [24 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from TouchoftheWind
Review:
Awesome! What will Spike tell him, the truth or not! EEE! Update soon!
Comments from author:
Thank you. I believe he will and should tell the truth but I won't spoil the suspense. LOL!
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [24 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from TouchoftheWind
Review:
It looks great! Did the explanation i gave you help, or did it make you more confused? LOL!
Comments from author:
Yeah to the 1st part
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [17 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from TouchoftheWind
Review:
When your logged in at the top of chp one of this story click to edit the chapter, open the link the i sent you for the picture in another window, at the top of the chapter add in the html link which is with the pic link i sent you and copy and paste it, undernesth just type that the banner was made by me and it should work.
Comments from author:
Banner is with Chapter 1. Yay!
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [15 Sep 08] • Not Rated
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