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Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from SwedishFrog
Review:
YAyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
And it just gets better!
Love this.
Don´t listen to the others. There are wayyy to few fics out there with a Spike that´s all cute and not just obnoxious and snarky.
And me as a huge Spikefan can´t help but wonder why so many authors don´t try to write the more complex sides of Spike......
You actually DO that and that´s one of the things I like with this fic ;)
And I, unlike some other reviewer, DO think Gunn and Spike are in character because they are alone without all the others around and in love so therefore they are allowed to be all cutesy n stuff *giggles*
Keep chapters coming and I´ll try and do the same with my Winchester Brothers fic.
/SwedishFrog
Comments from author:
OOO! Thank you. You just may have jumpstarted my muse again. It is so refreshing for some to recognize that there are many facets of characterization especially when away from others. I do think Gunn and Spike are in character as well because ths is how they are when they are with a significant other. Sensitivity in a man does not negate his manliness. Characterization like Spike is dynamic not unchanging.
Review By [SwedishFrog] • Date [13 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from nomadbeth
Review:
Ok, pairing good. Fairly hot. But, please don't sissify Spike?

However, aww bless. Bad poetry is SO the way to Spikey's heart.
Review By [nomadbeth] • Date [1 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from AnnOfMidnight
Review:
I love slash, but this is WAY out of character. Even though it's fanfic so we obviously go out of canon's way, the characters have to be recognisable.

Now, we know Spike was a bloody aweful poet, but why would Gunn be? Unless he's writing because he knows Spike was a poet before and is trying to impress him. Also, what's the justification for them to be treating each other like women with all the niceties and the nicknames? They've been known to be sensitive at times, but this seems over the top, like a demon has trapped them into some Harlequin novel (which would actually be pretty awesome!)

I hope you continue, since we can't get enough slash, but I'd wish for a little more justification.
Review By [AnnOfMidnight] • Date [1 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SwedishFrog
Review:
I need more!!! Feeeeed meeeeee......
Comments from author:
It's cooking. Haha! Most likely in a few days ch 2 will be up. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Review By [SwedishFrog] • Date [27 Jul 08] • Not Rated
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