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Review of chapter "Main event." from agnar
Review:
Well you killed my interest in the series already. The totally unexplained and ridiculous appearance of Dawn, only to have her vanish again because her time hadn't come, well what the fuck was she doing there then? The monks made dawn for one night only to dress as batgirl??? Retarded.

Then you bone it all up by basically killing Xander as far as the buffy verse goes, making him Dick possessing Xander's body? Lame and dumb. I want to read about Xander having Dicks memories and skills, plus since you threw it in, some of the hyena's power. Not Dick Grayson inhabiting Xanders body.

Had potential if done right, but like so many such fics, it wasn't done right. Xander in DC done this way also won't work for me because Batman would likely get him locked up right away for not being Dick, so this path for the fic blows all the way around.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review.

This is the story I wanted to right.

I'm happy with it.

Raf
Review By [agnar] • Date [25 Feb 14] • Rating [4 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Monday Morning" from BlueRonin
Review:
Interesting twixt on the Halloween spell. I'm gonna check out the next one.
Comments from author:
Have fun reading.

Thank you for the review.

Raf
Review By [BlueRonin] • Date [11 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Monday Morning" from JackDag
Review:
This one was good as well.

Hope to see more of this in the future.
Comments from author:
This one is done.

check out Nightwing II

Raf
Review By [JackDag] • Date [18 Oct 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Monday Morning" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Workin my way thru your body of work and, gotta tell yah, I'm really likin it! Keep it up and you will go far!
Comments from author:
Thank you.

Raf
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [29 Sep 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Monday Morning" from zTiamaTz
Review:
Great story, I especially like the fact that you included Cordy in the upgrade, rather then just making her arm-candy. I'll be reading the next parts in the near future.
Review By [zTiamaTz] • Date [29 Oct 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Gadgets part III" from FariaLyton
Review:
8 times 4 is 32. Not 24. Other than that, awesome.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review and the heads up.
Raf.
Review By [FariaLyton] • Date [19 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Monday Morning" from Obsidian
Review:
Great story. One of the best Batman but not batman type stories I've read in a LONG LONG time. THanks
Comments from author:
Thank you
Raf
Review By [Obsidian] • Date [26 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Nightwing" from nemogbr
Review:
Read the story again after Xander Wing. Wondering about a few things:

Dawn - Will the key now be stuck in the DC Universe? Goodbye Glory. Although what will happen when Xander asks about the Dawn/Cassandra in the Buffyverse. The Scoobies will not have a scooby about the whole thing.

Money and resources - Always thought they had gold krugerands, as well as, paper money.

I can see his technology being a century(at least) more advanced.
He can set up a company with Calendar and Giles as fronts. They will need the income, unless transferring funds from criminals becomes an option.

Hope you give him his own batcave.
Comments from author:
Most of these questions will be answered in Nightwing II.

Thank you for the review.

Raf.
Review By [nemogbr] • Date [19 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Roof hopping." from VillageOrchid
Review:
Intersting plot developement with Jerry the lunch meat... I mean consciencious police officer.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review.
Officer Jerry's next appearance will be in Book II of the Nightwing saga.
Raf.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [7 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Monday Morning" from Wolflady
Review:
Riiiight! High school shouldn't be a problem at all, at all. Popcorn, anyone?
Comments from author:
Everyone knows. High school is combat training for the rest of your life.
The objective is to survive it.
Not even to come out sane. just survive it.

Thank you for the review.
Raf.
Review By [Wolflady] • Date [6 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Monday Morning" from Bobboky
Review:
good
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review.
Raf
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [5 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Monday Morning" from grd
Review:
Don't know if Dick can do anything about Xander's home life. That's a challenge in itself. Perhaps his police training would help.
Comments from author:
There's limited options for an abusive situation.
The other party must be willing to accept the help. They need to recognize that they are in fact in an abusing environment. I'm not sure what direction this will take. While writing this chapter I thought that Jessica would leave with her son. I know I'm the one writing this fic but sometimes I try to see things from the characters point of view and they surprise me with the decisions they make. I just write it down and see what happens. From time to time the characters can change the direction of the story with the decisions they make.

Thank you for the review.
Raf
Review By [grd] • Date [5 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Roof hopping." from Bobboky
Review:
good
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review.
Raf
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [4 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Gadgets part III" from Bobboky
Review:
nice
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review.
Raf
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [3 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Gadgets part III" from desartrattaz
Review:
I am really enjoying this story.
Comments from author:
I'm glad.
Thank you for the review.
Raf
Review By [desartrattaz] • Date [3 Apr 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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