Oh gods! Xander voice! Voice of Xander! Awesome. Delightfully funny and you got Xander's voice perfect. I almost want to see a continuation, but it just couldn't get any awesomer, and details might ruin it. Amazing!
Review By [heartsinger] • Date [16 Jul 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Very Nice! This is soo hot! You weave a web of suggestion and imagery that calls up a high level of desire and only in the last sentence there is one direct descriptive word. Very well done.
Review By [Malu] • Date [4 Feb 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
I think I must have read this on another site so I may have review twice but you can't have too much praise I figure. I love this story. Very well done.
Comments from author:
You probably read it on my LJ (since that's the only other place it's archived - if you think it was somewhere else, please let me know!), but you're right - you can never have enough praise. I'm so happy that you enjoyed this enough to review it twice. ;)
Review By [kyzhart] • Date [30 Jul 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
You amaze me with how skillfully you wove this story. Each word was used to add dimension, sensation, depth, back-story and plot development. I could hear the words, feel everything and the best part, you left me wanting more.
I'll be in my bunk, waiting for more. This will pacify, satisfy for a little while. I will hunt your other stories while I wait.
It's summer, but I don't think I'll blame the sweat on what the thermometer is reading.
Comments from author:
Thank you so much for such a fantastic review!
I'm so happy that you enjoyed this piece - Xander is always fun to write, so it's one that I enjoyed, also.
Have fun cooling off!
Review By [XanLickquidluv] • Date [29 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I dunno about more - I've got lots of other bunnies in my brain, clamoring for attention, but Xander was lots of fun...he might resurface some time. ;)
Thanks for your review!
Review By [junnights] • Date [28 Jul 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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