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Review of chapter "12" from Delkatar
Review By [Delkatar] • Date [16 Aug 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "12" from Oxnate
I'm glad I read the review that said there was a sequel.

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Comments from author:
Glad you liked the the first story, can't wait to see how you liked the second(if I read you right)! Expessily how we ended it. Lastly, thank you for showing me how to put my stories into a series. Just forgot to do that when I started all this and didn' t know how to correct it. Hopefully we will get the next story started soon so you can enjoy more of it.
Review By [Oxnate] • Date [3 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "12" from CageFire
Wow, rather interesting fic. Although, if your other fic is a sequel to this fic, shouldn't you add them both to a series. That way this'll have a link to your other story at the end. I might not have even known there was a sequel except I found the second fic first.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review! Hope you stick with us! And sorry about that. But I just forgot to do that when I started the next story and I don't konw how to do it now that its going now.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [20 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "12" from (Current Donor)NekoHibiki
Comments from author:
I am glad you liked it. I hope you will continue to review our stoies.
Review By [(Current Donor)NekoHibiki] • Date [12 May 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "3" from Vassago
Review: rapidly going down the drain.

It'd be great if it was only one to three people changing costumes, and four is fine as well, but when you get to changing the ENTIRE cast...well, the only place that can go is Replaced Character fic area. You know, where a person's personality is completely changed into what they are fused with/go on Halloween as/are channeling via magic.

And if I wanted to read a bunch of characters in an almost completely incompatible world that are almost always going to be Out of Character (OoC)...well, I'd read a Naruto/Harry Potter crossover/fusion.
Comments from author:
I am sad to see that you are not enjoying it very much. We are tring to not have the characters too much out of character. Though we are having their costume affecting them a little. Me and my co-author will try to make things better so you will continue reading. If you can be a little more specific in the future, we will try to make it better. Though it just might not work out for you. I hope you continue to read.
Review By [Vassago] • Date [22 Apr 10] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "12" from LFW
Good character mix and a fun read. Thanks.
I do wonder why Xander would need to use his eyes when Tony attacked? Later when threatening, yes. But Tony is weaker than a student.
And I am very amused with Dawn looking up to Andrew; and a bit icked too.
Comments from author:
First, thank you for reviewing. And as for Tony...well when we wrote it, it sounded cool at the time, but now you can say Xander was really ticked so he activated it subconsciously. And don't worry about Andrew and Dawn, at the most, it will be a older brother (perhaps very protective one) to younger sister. Hope to hear some reviews on the sequel, The Hidden Hand. So yes, please continue to review. And as I have said, if you have not read it, if you can think of anything that can improve the story, please let us know.
Review By [LFW] • Date [1 Apr 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "12" from MiraniEmrysAnduin
OMG1 That was great! I LOVE Naru-buffy fics!
I can't believe you made Angel Kakashi and Giles Juraiya of all people! That was cruel! But it WAS really funny! I can't wait to read the sequel!
Comments from author:
I'm glad you liked it. And I hope you enjoy the sequal, we are on chapter 7 now and it is call The Hidden Hand if you did not know. Will be looking forward to what you think of it.
Review By [MiraniEmrysAnduin] • Date [2 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "11" from Vld
Oh, I loved that. I just have one question. Where did Amy/Tayuya disappear? I do have a guess, involving Warren/Orochi-yarou, but I REALLY hope I'm wrong. I actually like Tayuya, and i liked Amy a lot in seasons one to three.
Comments from author:
First of all, thanks for the review, I was almost thinking no one really cared one way or the other about our story. And as for Amy, please remember there are a lot of charactor and their is a chance that all will not appear in a chapter. But we will be tring to have each charactor or a group of them be front and center for an chapter or two. So it will not be centering on just Buffy, Xander, Willow, and Giles. Everyone will have their time in the spotlight. Though if it looks like, later on, that we are forgetting someone, please say so and we will try to correct it. And as for Amy and Warren, nothing is happening right now, though now you have given me an ideal to maybe have something happen to her. So now I guess you will have yourself to blame if something bad happens to her! Just kidding!... Maybe. Please contiue to read and review!
Review By [Vld] • Date [14 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "12" from Bobboky
Comments from author:
I am going to try to link all the stories from now on so that it will be easier for you all to track.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [7 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "12" from (Recent Donor)deitarionSSokolow
You're supposed to use the site's built-in Series system. Then, among other things, people get a direct link from the last chapter of this fic to the first chapter of its sequel.
Comments from author:
Sorry, I will try and fix that.
Review By [(Recent Donor)deitarionSSokolow] • Date [6 Jan 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "12" from anomoly
Yes please do continue
Comments from author:
We might. ; )
Review By [anomoly] • Date [21 Nov 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "12" from Rebelgirl
I absolutely adored the Sakura/Ino interaction of Willow and Harmony. Nearly wet myself there. And Tara and Joyce as the Godaime and her loyal ANBU. Wicked!

You've gotta continue this one. Or at least do a sequel. PLEASE!

Comments from author:
I am glad that you are pleased. And well, I think I got what I was hopping for in a response for us to continue. Though it might be a while before it comes out. We have to put all our ducks in a row for this to work after this story, so it will make sense and be good. Though I am surprise no one has commented on how the story ended.
Review By [Rebelgirl] • Date [18 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "12" from misterq
Excellent job. Seems Roachy-chan hid his personality and I wonder what the Mayor will think of the 9-tails and its friends. My vote is to Continue. :)
Comments from author:
At this rate, it looks like it might be a go. And if we continue, we have done some thinking on the matter.
Review By [misterq] • Date [17 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "12" from JediKnight
Great job on the updates, I really hope you'll be doing a sequel. It would be a pity if you didn't; so much so that I'll use 1,000-years of death on you.
Comments from author:
NOOO!!!! Anything but that!
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [17 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "12" from Dargos
Please continue.
Comments from author:
We will see.
Review By [Dargos] • Date [17 Nov 08] • Not Rated
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