Review of chapter "Hit First, Recruit Later" from starletharlot
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YAY! You're not dead!
Love the Buffy twitch. Andrew is just too cute for words. So is Buffy for that matter, all worried about Willow kinda, sorta, maybe quite possibly maiming and/or murdering her. And for trying to shirk the leadership duty. (hee. I said doody). Write more soon! Prove to us that you're still not dead. Because that is majorly of the good.
Review By [starletharlot] • Date [9 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "He Had Been Evil, After All" from Angelfirenze
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I can't think of words to describe my elation at how Andrew met his father and Buffy and Dawn confronted theirs. Never mind that they're the same guy, it's just complicated.
Hank has burned a lot of bridges and the very idea that he could possibly expect anything more than perfunctory with his daughters is beyond a long shot.
And given his son's allied, now borderline loving relationship with them, his chances with Andrew are infinitesimal, I would hope.
But watching him squirm on the line would be so very fun.
Review By [Angelfirenze] • Date [11 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I'm inexplicably enthralled by this consider that Andrew annoys the crap out of me most of the time but I can't WAIT (I can't even type at the moment) to see how this plays out.
Angel's reaction, given Andrew's treatment of him during Dana's case, would definitely interest me. Especially the part where Angel would have to force himself to look at Andrew in a different light. Hee. Poor Angel.
Review By [Angelfirenze] • Date [11 Apr 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I got a chance to finish this last night and looooove it. Yes, I can now defnitely see your interest in exploring post 7 Potential life. Very cool with having Faith and Buffy pick teams to determine successors. I was going to have the new slayers, as part of Slayer Academy curriculumn, meet in small mentoring groups with either Buffy or Faith once a week. I think you were asking in one of your AN if people had training ideas- I'm working on mine right now but you're welcome to use them once I add the next chapter. Teehee- I've been thinking of fun seminar names :)
I'm looking forward to reading more of this! Andrew has always been one of my favorite characters and he's soooo fun to write :)
Comments from author:
Sorry for the late reply! I was out of town and was too lazy to use my phone to do this, haha. Thanks for the review! I'm actually reading your newest chapter the The Slayer Academy, Vol 1! Loving it so far! I have some ideas for what I wanna do, but after reading yours, I might take it in another direction.
And I love Andrew, I had to write a story featuring him!
Review By [Luna] • Date [28 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I really like the way you had Buffy handle this situation. I did want to make you aware of a mistake though: when the girls were brought into Buffy's office, you said that "Lisa" was sitting there with a sullen look on her face...don't you mean Ali? :)
Comments from author:
Correction made and thank you!
Review By [spk] • Date [21 Aug 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "But It's Necessary" from Javian
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Just discovered this story & am enjoying it! Some really amusing lines (Buffy's "we picked you for your fashion sense" springs to mind), and the various 'backup' slayers are great. Keep it up.
Review of chapter "Gross. How Do We Kill It?" from Dapsy
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I love the story,
not sure what more to say. It is fun, interesting, Hank gets his, and it has just right amount of drama and bad. I will sure return to read more as you add chapters :)
Review By [Dapsy] • Date [18 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "You’ve Met Her, Like In Person, One On One?" from Nosi
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Buffy's last line was excellent. But I'm slightly confused - if Buffy's training four slayers, why are there five there ? Maybe I don't remember something from an earlier chapter, like she decided to add another ?
Comments from author:
Whoops, I messed up. Thanks for catching that! Hopefully, I fixed all the mistakes. There are five slayers.