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Review of chapter "Issue Five" from nomorebread
Review:
Aaaarrrrggghhhh!!!! Please update this most wonderful, amazing story! It's fantastic! Please, please, please!
Review By [nomorebread] • Date [20 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Issue Five" from weap
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Hope what is happening in the comic is not happening here :X
And in the end there will still be Buffy/Wonder Woman.
Because that was an "Awwwww" moment and I love it!
Cause seriously I am reminded all over again that Buffy and Angel will have sex and almost give birth to Twilight that will end the world.
Forcing Buffy to end all magic in that world, and that is a downer :(
Review By [weap] • Date [31 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Issue Five" from JasonBarnett
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you know, I just realized reading this that Buffy really slacked off with the Dawn thing. Dawn may have cheated, but that doesn't give a demon an excuse to cast a spell on her sister. He should've been slain.
Review By [JasonBarnett] • Date [21 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Issue Five" from tealruby
Review:
Great to see this story active again - it was a great way to start the morning!
Review By [tealruby] • Date [21 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Issue Five" from lunalurker
Review:
It's back, hooray! And there was some serious "D'awwww!" in there among the funny, and then zomg cliffhanger!
Please feel free to update this more often, because I like it muchly and cliffhangers are evil. So there!
Review By [lunalurker] • Date [21 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Issue Five" from (Current Donor)Tempi
Review:
It was a nice surprise to see you've decided to continue this excellent story. I look forward to reading more.
Review By [(Current Donor)Tempi] • Date [21 Aug 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Issue Five" from batzulger
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I like the script format (my 2ยข), and I really really like the story
Review By [batzulger] • Date [21 Aug 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Issue Four" from tealruby
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I have to say actually like the scripted format (as well as the story itself). It allows for some verbal shortcuts in writing that are fun to read, plus it also allows the reader to visualize the story as a comic book or even TV show. Hopefully you can continue it.
Review By [tealruby] • Date [29 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Issue Four" from deathgeonous
Review:
Hmm, while this is very good, it would be even better in non-script format. Well, thanks for writing this anyways, bye for now.
Comments from author:
Appreciate the feedback. Thanks for reading. :-)
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [21 Jun 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Issue Four" from TwoBlackDragons
Review:
You could always a do PWP fic from this point on.
Comments from author:
Heh. Not really my forte. ;-)
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [25 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Issue Four" from TwoBlackDragons
Review:
I probably originally tried to read this before you reformatted is as I had it hidden. Really enjoyed reading it up to this point. I hope your muse lets you finish it at some point.

I generally enjoy all your stuff and I really like fem slash, preferably Buffy centered.
Comments from author:
Thanks a lot. I really like the story myself. What stalled me is the plot. I hate plot. LOL. But I just can't figure out what the Joker's plan is, and until I figure that out, the story is stuck.

I actually do have the beginning of "Issue Five" written, though.
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [25 Mar 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Issue Four" from Javian
Review:
This is lovely! Great story, and vastly amusing. :)
Comments from author:
Thanks. :-) I just wish I knew how to finish it....
Review By [Javian] • Date [4 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Issue Three" from PATM
Review:
It is true there are a lot of colon's (the ones we use in writing)in this story; they put me off
at first.Where there is writing there is information being given to the reader and our easy
job is to fill out the space given to us. Pat
Review By [PATM] • Date [25 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Issue One" from (Moderator)Ava
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While in your story, "ToH - Don't Talk With Your Hellmouth Full" the script style worked and lended itself to the dialogue but this story just falls flat. The script format is extremely difficult to follow and it actually reads as if you just didn't 'feel' like writing exposition or prose which isn't a good thing.
Comments from author:
Well, while I liked the idea of visualizing the different shots and things, it's no fun if no one else can. So you're the straw that finally broke my back. :-) It's still not prose, but I changed it to the style of that other fic, because I still want to keep it in a semi-script format, but I hope it's easier to read.
Review By [(Moderator)Ava] • Date [18 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Issue Two" from (Current Donor)Tempi
Review:
Well the new format took some getting used to, but it doesn't alter the fact that the story is excellent. I look forward to reading more about Buffy and Diana's relationship.

Love the tension between Bruce and Buffy.
Comments from author:
Much thanks. :-)
Review By [(Current Donor)Tempi] • Date [16 Aug 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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