Review of chapter "Alliances, Threats, and....." from Hawklan
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nice to see more of this story. The kidnapping of raven was nice and Xander has balls to fly with those two.
Comments from author:
I know those two....personally.
Review By [Hawklan] • Date [24 Sep 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Alliances, Threats, and....." from claws
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... *chuckle* Is it sad that I recognized the parody's source within the first sentence? :) It's nice to see you updating regularly again, and I'm sorry to hear about your computer - it must have been either a Dell or an eMachine, depending upon how long it lasted and in what way it failed.... I'm curious...have you made much progress on the next chapter of Clown Prince? It'd be interesting to see how Joey reacts to meeting 'J. J.' Drake....
Comments from author:
Little to no progress on Clown Prince, sadly. I don't know whether to have Joey become more evil without the influence of his girls to keep in check or for him to stay the same.
Review of chapter "Alliances, Threats, and....." from rinv
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THANK YOU!!!
Comments from author:
You are welcome.
Review By [rinv] • Date [27 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Alliances, Threats, and....." from Morgomir
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I'm so sorry to hear that about your computer. The story is fantastic. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks, good to have some fellow mourners.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [26 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Alliances, Threats, and....." from nemogbr
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He reminded me of Gul Dukat.
Loved his daughter, but nothing else.
Xander Wilson has sociopathic tendencies, but still seems to have an honour system.
Comments from author:
Not much of one. He considers rapists to be weak as rape is normally about power and to rape someone is a sign that one has no control over themselves or their urges. He considers himself powerful and a master of himself so to him it is a sign of weakness, something he hates.
Review By [nemogbr] • Date [26 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Alliances, Threats, and....." from nemogbr
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I thought that FAith would end up fixating on Deathstroke or she would end up working for him. Hope he can turn her to his side rather than stay under the Mayor's influence.
He can also give the rest of the Scoobies some more training.
Comments from author:
What's wrong with the Mayor? He truly loved Faith as a daughter and protected her the best he could. He was even willing to stop his plans for Ascension for her sake. I like the guy.
Review By [nemogbr] • Date [26 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Alliances, Threats, and....." from CrystalBlaze
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Where the HELL did you come up with that Beer Pong song? *rofl*
That's so bad it's actually befitting being paced to the Poke`mon theme song!
Lovely example of preconception screwing one over on Raven's part.
Comments from author:
Got bored, played beer pong, got *very* high, and watched my cousins Dane and James win against everybody. Eventually I stared humming and thus the Beer Pong Song was born.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [26 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Alliances, Threats, and....." from JediKnight
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Good job on the new chapter, I hope that you'll be able to add more to this soon.
Any clue when you'll add more to "No Fate"?
What about "Every Man's Devil" and/or "The Couger"?
Comments from author:
Not the slightest.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [26 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Alliances, Threats, and....." from eriktheviking
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This was a great update, Slade's views on the Mayor's plans were interesting, but who are the Daniels' brothers?
Comments from author:
The brothers are actually my cousins, I grew up with them. They're darn good friends too.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [25 Aug 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Alliances, Threats, and....." from Dragonelf
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Yay, new chapter!
::Gives the plot bunny some Smörgåstårta (Sandwich cake)::
#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=# The rule is perfect: in all matters of opinion our adversaries are insane. - Mark Twain #=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#
Comments from author:
Thanx.
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [25 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Alliances, Threats, and....." from BlueEyedJedi
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You balance Xander and Slade very well. Keep it coming.
Comments from author:
I will.
Review By [BlueEyedJedi] • Date [25 Aug 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Alliances, Threats, and....." from LightningSkies
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The beer pong song cracked me up. I love your evil? Xander.
Comments from author:
Thanks, it just came to me.
Review By [LightningSkies] • Date [25 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Alliances, Threats, and....." from crimsonkyuubi
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yay an update... no on to the review. i like the chapter and how you are portraying xander as slade and xander. i also like how you are keeping xander "alive" in the story and not just making him slade. i look forward to more of your work.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I needed to bring in a bit of Xander.
Review By [crimsonkyuubi] • Date [25 Aug 09] • Not Rated
