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Review of chapter "Chapter One—Little Lost Slayer, Found" from BlueEyedBrigadier
Review:
Oh dear....between Buffy's fractured mental state and the fact the story hasn't been added to in 5+ years, this story has left me feeling rather lop-sided. Still, an excellent start :D
Review By [BlueEyedBrigadier] • Date [29 Apr 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One—Little Lost Slayer, Found" from ChefJackButler
Review:
This is another one that looks to interesting to just abandon.
Review By [ChefJackButler] • Date [27 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One—Little Lost Slayer, Found" from Millaros
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Signora, please, update!

There are cookies?
Review By [Millaros] • Date [28 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One—Little Lost Slayer, Found" from (Past Donor)exiled
Review:
I love your writing style and I wish you had more time to devote to writing.

This story has a great deal of potential should you ever come back to it. You have a unique way of describing your characters so that I feel like I know them after a few sentences. In this story, the shrink, Simon and Bill are fully realized.

I love the way you portray the Council in this story, not as a bad organization nor a good one, just a focused one.

Once again, I truly enjoy all your stories and I thank you for the endless hours of enjoyment they have given me.
Review By [(Past Donor)exiled] • Date [29 Jul 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One—Little Lost Slayer, Found" from clarityfades
Review:
This story really intrigues me...can't help hoping Buffy ends up scalping Cordelia when they meet. Being the more violent Buffy, I could see that happening! ;) & I hope that while she's more attentive to Giles as her Watcher (particularly listening to what he says), that she hasn't lost all of her spark--I don't want her to be the Valley-girl twin of Kendra, just doesn't seem right. Can't wait to see how Buffy adjusts to Giles, the Watchers, & Sunnydale. & the bodyguards could provide some interesting times as well! Great start!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I think that Buffy will react one of two ways to someone like Cordelia. Either submissively, or violently. So yes, watch out. Has Buffy lost her spark? She is focused to the point of manicalness. It's a point that she didn't reach until much later in the series, and never to the point that she has here. Expect a lot of interesting stuff as Buffy interacts for the first time with various BtVS figures. 8)
Review By [clarityfades] • Date [13 Oct 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One—Little Lost Slayer, Found" from ecifrog
Review:
Interesting start. I am looking forward to reading more...
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. More coming soonish, ecila. 8)
Review By [ecifrog] • Date [8 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One—Little Lost Slayer, Found" from RabidBunnys
Review:
(Does anyone out there know exactly what date in canon that Buffy was called?)

I don't know the exact date, but I do know that she was 15 when she was called. I really like this story so far, but then I like ALL your stories so... (shrugs). But I do have to say that I can't wait for some character interaction. Like with Oz, Giles, and her new bodyguards.

Oh, and I have to say that this is the first Millennial Slayer story I've ever read. And also will this follow the outline of the Original Buffy Seasons?

Can't wait for the next chapter~

JA~
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I'll probably have her called a couple of months after school starts. I'm glad you liked the story. The next chapter is far more heavy with dialogue than Chapter 1.

There will be changes to the story from canon. I am waiting to put an AU label on it until I see how much I'm changing. The general outline may stay the same, but expect this Buffy to do things differently than Original Buffy.

More coming soonish. 8)
Review By [RabidBunnys] • Date [6 Aug 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One—Little Lost Slayer, Found" from wolfman
Review:
Yet ANOTHER new fic from you. Great stuff. I am always happy to read anything you write and this one is very intriguing so far - great start. I am looking forward to more. Having said that, however, I note that you now have six fics posted here. This in itself is fine with me, especially since you have been updating very quickly - thanks. You DO plan to finish them all, though, I hope? Anyway thanks for a great read and more soon please.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I'm glad you like this story and my others.

I do plan to finish every story. I write the one which most inspires me at any given moment, so some get updated more often that others. But they all get a little added here and there. So don't worry. Not even about the other new story I am posting today. 8)
Review By [wolfman] • Date [5 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One—Little Lost Slayer, Found" from lunargoddess
Review:
A very interesting beginning to the story. You have such creative ideas! How old is Buffy by the way? I'm glad Giles is still going to be her Watcher, he is one of my favorite characters. I eagerly await the next chapter!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. In this story, Buffy is 15. Yep, Giles will be there for her as her Watcher. More coming soon. 8)
Review By [lunargoddess] • Date [5 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One—Little Lost Slayer, Found" from prehensileclaw
Review:
Curious am I. More story to read please.

This is a very interesting start to an AU. I look forward to seeing where you take it.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. Curious, huh? Then we'll just have to satisfy you with more, which is coming soon. 8)
Review By [prehensileclaw] • Date [5 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One—Little Lost Slayer, Found" from anyareine
Review:
This looks like a really interesting story. I really like the bodyguards for some reason... I can just see them following her around whilst she walks the halls of SunnyD High growling at people that give her a second look. LOL. Update soon.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. They can't do that since Buffy has to fit in somewhat. But they'll be there to take her to and from school. Does anyone out there know exactly what date in canon that Buffy was called?
Review By [anyareine] • Date [4 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One—Little Lost Slayer, Found" from pezz
Review:
Very interesting idea. Great start! Can't wait to see what happens when she meets Giles.
Comments from author:
Thank for the review. It's going to be interesting when she does, whether she classifies him as authority or enemy...
Review By [pezz] • Date [4 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One—Little Lost Slayer, Found" from MountainWilliam
Review:
Interesting AU - looks like it's going to be a good story!

Buffy reminds me of how she was in "The Wish".

May I have another?
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. That's very similar to what I am going for. But a little more 'Yes sir!' and a little less "whatever, jeeves."

More coming soonish.
Review By [MountainWilliam] • Date [4 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One—Little Lost Slayer, Found" from greenfalcon
Review:
another promising story that is of to a great start. just a question the concept of a milinime slayer sounds familiar did this idea come from another story
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. The idea of the millenial Slayer has come up in a lot of fics, but my favorite out of those is Dominion Day and sequals by Oracle. Actually, to be completely truthful, I'm using the name more than anything else, since my 'Millenial' Slayer is quite different. But, I liked the name so I used it. 8)
Review By [greenfalcon] • Date [4 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One—Little Lost Slayer, Found" from gigi
Review:
Oh boy, not another one! Well, I'm sure this one will be just as interesting as the others.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. You ain't seen nothing yet. I have many, many, many more. I just haven't posted them yet... 8)
Review By [gigi] • Date [4 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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