Love your version of Connor, very true to character. How he's trying to help others, yet still has that hell dimension mentality to look out for himself. Hope to see more of this fic! Also love the banner, very dark, very fitting.
Review By [lostinthis] • Date [30 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Interesting and well written so far. You've done a very good Connor, capturing his confusion and hurt without going into agonizing detail over it, which is always the way to go. I've never watched CSI, so I don't know how well you're doing there, but the fact that you got me interested with no knowledge of the cross is a good thing in itself. Not quite enough information for me to accurately rate this story yet, but a few more chapters of the same will probably earn a 9.
Very nice Banner too. I like how overall the image is dark, but lighted by the city lights along the street, giving it a kind of blue glow. Pretty.
Keep it up.
Review By [Coldhands] • Date [29 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Wonderful update, Poor Connor, he seems so alone...I wonder what Angel is thinking now...surely he is looking for his son... I can't wait for another update! I am looking forward to how Gil meets Connor and their friendchip/mentorship with grow...
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [29 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I'm glad you liked, i cant wait for the update! I always find when my muse runs off for a vacation watching something that inspires me helps, maybe you could watch some CSI or Angel...or just read some good fanfics! LOL!
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [20 Oct 08] • Not Rated
OMG! Thanks so much! It's true, my muse left me for a while. But with a kick ass pic like this, I just HAVE to write again! I'll add it to the story when I post the new chapter (hopefully in the next 2 days!)
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [10 Oct 08] • Not Rated
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