Wonderful so far. You did however make one very noticeable tense error in the second to last paragraph, it's near the end of it so I'll let you find it yourself.^_^ Again I love what you have so far and I am looking forward to the next installment.
Review By [spring] • Date [6 Jun 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
More, more, more, please. This is a marvelous beginning, and I can't wait to find out what happens to shaman!Xander in the rest of the story. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to write and post more chapters sometime soon. Keep up the good work. Zafaran {mailto:} zafaran {at} fastmail {dot} fm
No substance, just a lot of bashing and it gets rave reviews. I'm so proud of our reviewers here. Pure quality.
As for the story, try to write the actual story instead of just an outline for a setup trying to hurry the character along to where you want to have him. Needs serious work.
Comments from author:
I just love reviews...thanks ever so much. I try my hardest to pick ONE character and work with their POV and considering this was a random attack from my muse I thought it went rather well. Thanks for reading, come back soon.
Review By [feynstrom] • Date [6 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Is this going to be Jack's SG-1 with Hammond in command or the other one? Also is this goign to be a Xander slash? If so can you hook Jack up with Xander? Almost everyone hooks him up with Daniel or Cam
Review By [LadyFoxFire] • Date [5 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Well this is certainly an interesting premise. Will he still be Xander or will you be giving him a new cannon Stargate identity. I hope he stays Xander but in a different dimension. Looking forward to reading more.
Review By [kyzhart] • Date [5 Aug 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
