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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from deathgeonous
Review:
I had totally forgotten about this fic. It's still great fun, so I'm glad I refound it. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [12 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from deathgeonous
Review:
Nice fic. Very cute. Thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Comments from author:
Thanks, glad you liked it.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [19 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from serenityselena
Review:
oh my ...
what an interesting beginning ^__^
Comments from author:
Thanks. Glad you liked.
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [2 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)Sulien
Review:
Gaaaah!!! You and the kid fic! This is utter, unrepentant, fluffy silliness for its own sake...and I am loving every single wonderful morsel of it! I could point out all of my favorite bits, but that would wind up being most of this first story, so I won't. I'll just say thank you very much for writing this and sharing it.

Well, I take that back. I have to tell you how much I absolutely loved you bringing Janet back (the Boys at Bridge really pissed me off when they killed her) and the same goes for bringing George Hammond into the mix. I really hope we see more of him later! I really miss Don S. Davis, may he rest in peace.

Also, I hope you manage to bring Paul Davis into the mix somehow as well; poor Paul never gets any love.

Thanks again!

*tucks bookmark for series away for reading on the bad days*
Comments from author:
Heee! I do love my kid fic. That is exactly right, fluffiness for its own sake. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

I have this desperate need to fixit when character die in stupid ways, thus resurrection!fic is also something I mess with a lot. George! George Hammond! I loved that General, man, you have no idea.

Heh. Paul. I might just... I mean, there are ideas and... Oh. Oh, look at that. Plot bunny. Out of thin air.

I really am glad you enjoyed this so much. :)
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [10 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from twlight
Review:
Oh this is just a wonderful story. I love it.
Review By [twlight] • Date [27 Feb 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gingiecat
Review:
*tears, tons of Tears*
This was adorable, and wonderful, and now i'm all happy and content and kinda crushing on you. in a totally platonic, this person is sooo great, and funny, and wonderful kinda way.
Comments from author:
*hands off hankies*
Thank you. And that's an awesome way to be crushed on, really.
Review By [Gingiecat] • Date [18 Feb 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TouchoftheWind
Review:
Very good
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [15 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from msanderlin
Review:
I would love to see pictures of all this kids. Have you thought of adding some?
Comments from author:
Fan Art is just not in my skill set. It's an interesting thought, though.
Review By [msanderlin] • Date [12 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SpacedCadet
Review:
The letter says that she’s my niece, but not to take her away from the others. That she needs them. So take care of her and the rest of them.”

Does Faith ever develop a family relationship with General Hammond?
Comments from author:
You really, really like this series, don't you?

We'll have to see. That does bring an interesting dynamic...
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [4 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Elleria
Review:
Is good.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [7 Jul 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from winnie
Review:
this is wonderful. I am looking forward to the sequel.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [winnie] • Date [18 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bobboky
Review:
wow, very good
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [25 Apr 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from PrincessTai
Review:
Twenty-three?

Vala as a 'mum' will be just great. Faith and Illyria will just LOVE her! :-D
Angel, as the oldest? Huh. I'd think that Lyria would be the oldest. And that was sooo sweet, I remember how Angel was when he could taste food. Oh, I just wanna snuggle! If one of them end up saying, 'yeah sure, ya'betcha' I think I'm going to squeal so loud with glee that'll alarm the rest of my family lol. Even though I had a VERY hard time doing so with little Xander and little Willow. And Spike's lisp!

Vala. Oh, Vala. Latent mother instinct. I can't wait to read the rest of it.

The gorgeos brunette is either Faith, Cordy, The others described by looks has me beat. Who is the strawberry-blonde boy? And Jack will soon learn how tight these groups of fighters are, I love that. SG-1 is a family, he'll get it. Albeit, they didn't live together the way all the others have. But I guess dying together and foreach other tends to do that to people, or at least heroes. Xander, still the 'touch stone', Angel too. I just love how they are themselves, but not. They are so obviously their ages. It's nice to see, not just Xander in a kid's body, but an honest little Xander. If the goregous brunette isn't Faith then the wary one is her, Fred. The fragile blonde, is Tara?

I love that you have Dana, Kit, and Carlos! And Jordy! Talk about characters I always felt coulda had more, especially the first three :-D
Anya's normal? I like Kit, Carlos, Doy's, and the former-wolf boy's powers. Niice and nifty :-D

Janet! I was wondering about her *bg*
And nifty, Ancient gifts for the former human four.

The end. Awww. Mama Vala. Oh, Xander. *sighs* Why am I not surprised that Xand is the one to unravel her first?
Comments from author:
Lots of kids, yes?

All of the kids love Vala. Lyrie is technically in Fred's body and Fred is younger, so. It made sense at the time. I don't know what it is with lisps. They're just so damned cute.

The brunette under Angel's arm is Cordy and the one tucked close to Xander is Faith, the wary one. The strawberry-blonde boy is Oz. The fragile blond is Anya.

I like giving one shot characters something more. And Anya's normal-ish.
Review By [PrincessTai] • Date [23 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SpacedCadet
Review:
Very nice!

One minor nit:"The President has agreed to let you use Air Force One to fly to California today." --Air Force One isn't a specific aircraft, it's the designation of whichever of several possible aircraft the President happens to be aboard.
Comments from author:
I know that but it's possible that the President thinks of all of his airplanes as Air Force One and, when lending one of them out, addresses them all as such. That said, this was written years ago, on the fly, in about two days. There really wasn't much of anything researched so I'm just happy that's your only nitpick.

Besides that, I'm glad you like it.
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [28 Dec 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Jackaniny
Review:
Wow, that was somthin' else... Good though
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [Jackaniny] • Date [12 Dec 08] • Not Rated
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