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Review of chapter "Fresh Meat." from JinaSolo
Review:
This story has potential.

More please!
Review By [JinaSolo] • Date [29 Oct 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fresh Meat." from burmafrdnow
Review:
The Master Vampire- I think you might be off course there. I doubt that anyone that has the rep that willow claims this one has would have been so careless and ill informed. Need to downgrade him some. Also the demon types- either leave them out or give more details- remember most demons despise Vampires as being at the bottom of the demon society.
Miley's slayer healing is much better than described; that is one thing that is pretty constant with all slayers is a certain level of strength and slayer healing. That does not vary much. Now if she had still been a potential, it would have been OK. They were shown to have a better healing factor than normal humans but not close to a Slayers healing. Remember a Slayer can heal a broken bone in a day or so.
Final Quibble: unless Dawn has acess to slayer like powers her going up against a vampire is sure death.
Review By [burmafrdnow] • Date [12 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fresh Meat." from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
Hey I just found this;

http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=HOgj2etJs3Y

I thought you might be interested.

All the best,
DaveT.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [13 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fresh Meat." from DawnDreamer
Review:
Great action scene. Can't wait for more
Review By [DawnDreamer] • Date [5 Sep 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Fresh Meat." from VillageOrchid
Review:
I continue to like your general story idea... but the execution could use more description and "connective tissue" between events and moments.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review. I plan to go back and revise the chapter later. The first draft I had of Fresh Meat, had a completely different feel to it, and it was the feeling I wanted. Of course when my computer and internet ate the chapter I hadn't copied it in hopes of saving it. *sulks* Right now I just want it out of my system in hopes of having some peace. Maybe when I go back through I'll get the original feel for the chapter back.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [4 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hannah Montana is a what?" from DawnDreamer
Review:
I would like to see Hannah slay some vampires
Comments from author:
See chapter four. I think I got enough fighting in. But it will probably end up being a split scene. Meh, it happens. *cuddles the review*
Review By [DawnDreamer] • Date [28 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Hannah Montana is a what?" from SupernaturalSlayer
Review:
This is a really interesting story. I never really thought about a HM/Buffy crossover lol. Just also wanted to add, Dawn was actually 15 in season 6. They mentioned it in the musical episode, so she would be older. But it doesn't really matter that much, just wanted to point it out :)
Comments from author:
Math is not my best skill set. Nor is determining ages. But thanks for pointing out that She'd actually be about a year or so older then what I had her listed as. Whoops. And never believe the innocent plot bunny act, it's just that. A deceitful little act to latch onto your brain span.
Review By [SupernaturalSlayer] • Date [18 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What is wth all the special effects?" from littleoldme
Review:
Hannah Montana as a slayer! Squee! :)

Ahem.

I like this quite a bit so far. It freaks me out to think of Dawn being the same age or near the same age as the Hannah crew, just because Miley seems so little to me, but I think it works for this fic. I'm anxious to see Miley having some slayer moments, both as Hannah and as herself. I'd also like to see some interaction between Lily and the scoobies, because I think they'd get along. More soon!
Comments from author:
I'm sure that normally there is a cure for slayerness. Something about drugs and Cruciamentium. But then again that was old council and they were all about the tests. Eventually I hope to get my computer to behave enough to let me finish this story.
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [11 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hannah Montana is a what?" from (Recent Donor)DaveTurner
Review:
Interesting start.

Couple of quibbles; it could do with some scene breaks. Found it a bit confusing to go from one group of people having breakfast to dawn talking somewhere else...and my pet quibble...It's #'Will' or 'Willow' I've never heard here called 'Wills' in canon! As I say minor quibbles.

I've never watched HM so I don't know whether you're doing the characters ok (they sound like normal teens in my head) and your Dawn is no worst than a lot of peoples.

As I say this is an interesting idea and it could turn into an interesting fic...I hope so. I'm putting a 'track' on this and hope you see it through to a conclusion.

All the best,
DaveT.
Comments from author:
Thanks Dave, when I was writing this (mostly just to get it out of my system) I was skipping over the scene switches. I most certainly will go back to fix that and make it flow better.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DaveTurner] • Date [11 Aug 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What is wth all the special effects?" from (Past Donor)lucidity
Review:
Never watched Hanna - don't know why I read this, but I love it, so keep on going!
Review By [(Past Donor)lucidity] • Date [10 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What is wth all the special effects?" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Not bad. The HM character dialog and actions are a little better than Dawn so far. An interesting premise. So Miley is a little weak in the "slayer healing" factor? Well every slayer has things that they're better or worse at. Thanks for sharing.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [10 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hannah Montana is a what?" from enderverse
Review:
two secret identities! A girl with a strange but not supernatural strange life. creative.
Review By [enderverse] • Date [10 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hannah Montana is a what?" from dhampirkinfolk
Review:
I don't know if I should condemn you for doing this, or congratulate you for having the cojones to do it.
Comments from author:
I am waiting for the nice men with the white jackets to come and take me to my padded room. I shouldn't have let the plot bunny fool me with its cute innocent act. It's all a lie and I need lots of help. I'm scared of myself.
Review By [dhampirkinfolk] • Date [10 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Hannah Montana is a what?" from (Past Donor)exiled
Review:
I was wondering when someone was going to do a Hannah fic. Can't wait for more.... Oh and don't tell anyone I watch Hannah Montana!
Review By [(Past Donor)exiled] • Date [9 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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