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Birth Of The Sarafan Brotherhood

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Review of chapter "Building The Ranks" from RankoNakajima
Review:
LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT! LOVE IT!

HELLSING FTW!!!!!!!

I can't wait to see what comes next! :)
Review By [RankoNakajima] • Date [21 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Building The Ranks" from BlueRonin
Review:
Come on, you can't stop now. This storie has so much potencial...
Review By [BlueRonin] • Date [7 Sep 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Birth Of A Priest" from Downery
Review:
Not one of your better stories glad you stopped writing it. Reminds me of the story where Alexander Anderson of the Helsing anime didn't kill Angel... doesn't make sense at all. Idiots shouldn't write about demon/vampire slayers that kill them on site if they don't want to kill Angel.
Review By [Downery] • Date [11 Jan 12] • Rating [1 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Building The Ranks" from Fayari
Review:
YEAH!!!!! MORE!!!!!!!
Review By [Fayari] • Date [6 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Building The Ranks" from Netchka
Review:
Love the story. Hope to read more in the future. Thanks.
Review By [Netchka] • Date [29 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Building The Ranks" from Mechconstrictor
Review:
I have to say that I've never come across a cross-over like this before and I've enjoyed reading it. Hope to see more of it.
Review By [Mechconstrictor] • Date [24 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Building The Ranks" from ShadowKage
Review:
Interesting, very interesting, the Rebirth of the Sarafan Brotherhood. Will this have Buffy/Angel/Willow/Giles Bashing? Or are they simply against Xander and the Sarafan Brotherhood? I look forward to future chapters with a great eagerness.
Comments from author:
Thank you and no bashing. I won't continue this, it's too horribly written. I might do a revamp of it eventually, though.
Review By [ShadowKage] • Date [26 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Building The Ranks" from Narf
Review:
Wow dam fine story you got here. It to bad there are not more Buffy/Soul Reaver stories done there so many ways this could be done. Anyway keep up the good work thanks and bye.
Comments from author:
I wish there were more too.
Review By [Narf] • Date [11 Jan 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Building The Ranks" from LordSia
Review:
I'm not really familiar with the Sarafan Order, being that I haven't played Legacy of Kain, but from what I've read I don't really like their attitude. Still, a great fic, lots of potential, so keep it coming.
Comments from author:
I never intended for them to be the 'good guys'. Everyone wants to justify their character, I want to make them more evil and that's what this is about.
Review By [LordSia] • Date [24 Dec 09] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Building The Ranks" from HolyKnight
Review:
WHY no updates on this?
Comments from author:
My muse went quiet on this one.
Review By [HolyKnight] • Date [2 Nov 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Building The Ranks" from Vilkath
Review:
Great idea and start, bit sad that it has not been updated in so long but one can only hope it will be continued some day. I also agree with a lot of things said in this story so far, that Buffy and the watchers do 'casual slaying' at best where they kill a few a night that might attack them. They don't actively seek out nest, don't hunt them during the day when obviously have a bigger advantage. No one tries to actively wipe out vampires from a town let alone the world, all they do is kill a few fledglings that might be dumb enough to attack the slayer personally and the occasional master who's big plan involved the slayer or the end the world.

This story has several elements I love, that being an improved Xander makes a difference, usually on his own. Memories from Halloween letting him set up to fight vampires in his own way, best when he didn't receive any actual special powers or abilities and relies entirely on skill and memories. The bit about Buffy and Willow is kind of sad but true, while best friends for life to start with almost everyone leaves Xander in the end.
Comments from author:
Not to mention I've never seen another fanatical Xander story.
Review By [Vilkath] • Date [13 Aug 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Building The Ranks" from Tamda
Review:
OH Hells yes!!!

Good job! And, uhm, if you ever read about the Paladins of Tyr, have Johnathon make referance to them... because... yeah.

They're Lawful Good that lays just this side of Lawful Evil. And I adore that you're going to be taking the side of good down to the line like that!
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [Tamda] • Date [17 May 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Building The Ranks" from BurningLight
Review:
like this one a lot. Hope you can get back to this one soon
Comments from author:
I may do another chapter soon.
Review By [BurningLight] • Date [19 Mar 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Building The Ranks" from lorwen
Review:
cool story.
hope you plan to continue.
Comments from author:
I will. I'm just caught up with everything right now. My little brother was born last night.
Review By [lorwen] • Date [4 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Building The Ranks" from Wolflady
Review:
Oh, boy! Can't wait to see what happens when My Little Princess finds out.

BTW: Write all you want, but if you don't have any intention of finishing the story, don't post it. This site already has WAY to many abandoned stories.
Comments from author:
Oh, I will finish it. If I don't then I hand it over to someone who will. Sometimes it just takes a while for some inspirations to show up. That's all.
Review By [Wolflady] • Date [20 Oct 08] • Not Rated
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