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A New Friend for Teal'c

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Review of chapter "Chapter 14" from Geyer
Review:
I've enjoyed the story so far. I like crossovers with the Stargate universe, and this is an engaging look at a friendship I hadn't imagined. The idea of Dennis moving along with Cordelia is fun. I hope you return to this story to tell us what happens next. Will Cordelia, Angel, and Wesley help out against the intruders next door? Are the MIB looking for Jack or SG-1 as a whole, or are they looking for Cordelia and got the wrong address? The introductions after would be interesting. Since they've never seen Dennis, and Jack is the suspicious type, maybe Angel or Wesley could be introduced as Cordelia's roommate, Dennis Angel or Dennis Wesley. Meanwhile, the back story for the Slayers was intriguing, and Illyria having a daughter would certainly change season 5 of Angel, especially if Illyria isn't brought back. It might have changed anyway, if Cordelia wasn't there to be possessed by Jasmine whenever that was (season 4?). Jonathan having an option that might keep him from falling under Warren's control is also good.

Thanks for posting the story. I look forward to more.
Comments from author:
Wow. I've had two reviews for this story recently. Maybe I should just give up on my half thought plans to re-write this and just continue it...

My favorite crossovers for Buffy are Stargate ones too. This is actually a challenge response for an unusual friendship. I almost went with Anya instead of Cordelia. Truthfully I wasn't that into the Angel series, it was way darker than I like so I'm very iffy on the timeline for Angel because of it, I only really watched seasons 1-2 and just random episodes beyond that. I probably won't delve into the details on Angel or Buffy but rather just mention in passing what happens there. I'm glad you like the story. I'm feeling motivated to write again. Thanks!
Review By [Geyer] • Date [15 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 14" from Silver
Review:
I was hoping that this wonderful fic would be updated by now, but... nope. This is why I cannot give it a 10. As it has now been 5 years since the last update, I can only sadly conclude that this will NEVER be updated. I know that muses go away, real life interferes, or sometimes, authors lose interest in the story or genre. Or they post stories elsewhere. If you are posting elsewhere, could you please let your readers know? I have enjoyed this story very much, but can no longer keep tracking it if it will never be updated. Therefore, I am removing it from my tracking list. I hope to see your stories again someday. Thanks for the great read!
Comments from author:
Truthfully this one got put on hold because I wanted to re-write it but I couldn't find the motivation to actually sit down and do it. This is the only story I've written that I've wanted to do that to. Has it really been 5 years? The last five years have been busy, among other things I finally got promoted into a full time position at my main work, while keeping my other part time job. So yes... Real life interference. I've not really given up on this story but I haven't really had time to work on many of my stories. I even started 2 new stories thinking I'd finish them quickly... Nope, just two more unfinished stories. Hopefully when I find the time to continue this you'll track it again.
Review By [Silver] • Date [10 Aug 14] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 14" from Spica
Review:
Any chance you might continue/finish this story sometime?

So rare with stories that makes good use of Cordelia. Even if the background setting feels a bit stretched i give it top score for novelty(OTOH, i never did like how Cordy was treated after leaving Buffy, and the Angel series was even more "stretched").
Comments from author:
Sometime... Yes. I know it's been a long time since I worked on most of my stories. This one is unique since it's the only story I've written where I want to go back and re-write chapters before continuing it. (Maybe it'll get rid of the stretched feeling you have.) It's different writing Cordy since I didn't really watch Angel much after the first season and I never really re-watched it like I did for Buffy. I'm also sorry that it's currently at a cliffhanger...
Review By [Spica] • Date [30 Jul 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 14" from jgoodman
Review:
Love this story and can't wait to read more, please update
Comments from author:
Awww. You just read all my stories, didn't you? I'm glad you like them! I'm hoping to do some re-writing before continuing this story. So this one might be awhile before updating. Sorry. ^_^;;;
Review By [jgoodman] • Date [17 Jan 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 14" from SpacedCadet
Review:
Please update !
Comments from author:
I know, I so need to work on this. I've left it at a cliff hanger too. I kind of want to re-write the chapters, I'm not happy with some of it now. I also have a lot of unfinished stories. 13 of them I think... This is where I hang my head in shame. My excuses: I'm now working 1.3 jobs; just joined a gym; and am attempting to see friends and family when we're free. My muse won't leave me alone though, so I'm going to attempt to write during my lunch hour. I just got a tablet on Friday, wish me luck? ^_^
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [16 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from fandomoverload
Review:
Oh I love this idea Tealc and and Cordy how xute.
Comments from author:
This is a challenge response. I read the challenge and my first thought was Teal'c and Anya and it morphed into Teal'c and Cordy. This is so hard to write because I know high school Cordy better, I only saw the Angel Cordy when the first season originally aired. And Teal'c is just hard to write. I remain constantly in fear of writing them way out of character, so I'm glad you like this. ^_^
Review By [fandomoverload] • Date [5 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 14" from ClumsyElf
Review:
Great story!! Hope to see more soon!!

SARH
Comments from author:
Oh! Thanks.
I'm actually planning to re-write this a little before continuing it. All these people who still ask about it make me want to start doing it before I finish some other stories like I'd intended. ^_~
Review By [ClumsyElf] • Date [2 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 14" from TwoBlackDragons
Review:
Evil Author\Muse = one who doesn't finish stories they start.
And this is a terrific story, so please stop being one of the Evilest of Authors\Muses.
Comments from author:
Yes... I am evil. Sadly I shall remain evil a little longer with this story. I've got 14 on-going stories right now that I'm trying to finish and this one is towards the middle of that list because I want to re-write it a little before continuing. Sorry. ^_^;;;
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [26 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 14" from Silver
Review:
I have had this story on my "tracking" list for a while along with "The Founding". I love the story, even though Cordy comes off as a liitle bit more of an airhead it seems at least around SG-1(except for Teal'c). I especially love how Dennis was able to come with her. Would like to see Teal'c and the others reactions to her having a ghost roomie. And just why is Jack nbeing such a jerk about Teal'c having friends outside the mountain? However, I can't give this a 10 because it has been over a year since this was updated. Will you please please update this soon??!!!
Comments from author:
Ah. I'm glad you like the story. It has been awhile since I worked on this. I feel bad because I know how much I hate it when I wait for someone else to write a chapter to a story I like. Only... I have a lot of on-going stories right now, 12 of them in fact. This one is a little further down my list of stories to work on because I want to re-write it a little before doing the next chapter. In fact that's why it's 12th/last on that list. I have 7 stories I want to finish before I can think about tackling this one again. "The Founding" is first on my list of stories I want to finish if that cheers you up any.

In regards to Jack being a little jerky, I think, in part, it's because he was the one sharing Earth culture with Teal'c and now Cordy is doing it. At least I think that's a little part of it. But then again maybe I'm wrong since I haven't worked on this story in so long. ^_~;;;
Review By [Silver] • Date [14 Nov 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 14" from Keshkreature
Review:
Oh, I like Cordelia and Teal'c's relationship, and everyone's interactions. I really want to know who the MIBs are though, and how it's gonna look when Cordelia and co. come over to investigate! Good luck writing!
Comments from author:
It's getting kind of hard to write their interactions so I'm glad you like it. I'm going to try to finish some of my stories, especially this one. So hopefully I'll update it soon. ^_^;;;
Review By [Keshkreature] • Date [25 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 14" from calikocat
Review:
So I think Cindy rocks and I love her to pieces for saving Jono from a horrible fate. I also like your take on Cordy and the odd skills she's picked up over the years. Pretty cool fic over all. So, what happens next?
Comments from author:
It's odd how much more important Cindy has ended up in my story line then I'd originally intended. I'm going to try to work on my stories soon. ^-^ Hope you like what's going to happen next.
Review By [calikocat] • Date [9 Mar 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 14" from LadyParadox
Review:
I'm loving this story so far, great characterizations! Please post more soon, I'm dying to find out who is breaking in to Jack's place!!!
Comments from author:
I've written like 2 paragraphs of the next chapter. ^-^;;

I'll try to work on this some more soon. I feel like every time I start working on it another idea hits me and I just have to write it instead.
Review By [LadyParadox] • Date [17 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TwoBlackDragons
Review:
And here it is.
Comments from author:
YAY! Makes me want to write the next chapter! ^_~
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [1 Nov 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 14" from TwoBlackDragons
Review:
Probably going to get my Nov. Recommend.
Comments from author:
^o^ Thankies!
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [25 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 14" from willowbee
Review:
Very interesting.
Comments from author:
Only interesting? ^_~
Review By [willowbee] • Date [2 Oct 09] • Not Rated
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