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Review of chapter "Crimson Release" from xmenloganfan
Review:
I really like this but hope that you have finished this story!

Lady XLF
Review By [xmenloganfan] • Date [1 Mar 04] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of story "Crimson arc" from Anonymous Reviewer
Review:
What a nicely creepy portrayal of Betsy's transformation. And I do have to wonder about the three 'pounds of flesh' so to speak. I can't imagine this ending well for anyone... Looking forward to the next bit.

houses
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [2 Sep 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Crimson arc" from Anonymous Reviewer
Review:
Well, as I don't have a diddly squat clue about Crimson Dawn, canon or not, and don't remember Betsy at all, I was a bit reluctant to give this a read. I'm glad I did, however, since it's accessable to even those who have no clue.

You've presented enough of a glimpse of pre-Crimson Betsy that her change is given the proper weight, and the description of the numerous little changes are intriguing enough to really push the reader forward, leave him or her wanting more. I like Logan's perspective on things, how keenly observational he is, how invested in his surroundings. It's lovely to read, rich and detailed, and makes the story that much more appealing to a broader audience.

I'm looking forward to seeing what happens with Betsy and the boys when they make their travels.

houses
Review By [Anonymous Reviewer] • Date [28 Aug 03] • Not Rated • Add Comment
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