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Review of chapter "Battle of the Gadgets" from Labrid
Review:
fun read would be nice to see what happens after probably a lot of chaos
Review By [Labrid] • Date [7 Mar 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Battle of the Gadgets" from (Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
that was go go gadget fun...
Review By [(Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [28 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Battle of the Gadgets" from JediKnight
Review:
Great story, but I wish Buffy didn't remain a robot.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [5 Sep 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Battle of the Gadgets" from misterq
Review:
This was a nice little story! Is Uncle Tackleberry from the Police Academy movies? And what will happen to Buffy's decapitated body, I wonder. If demons get a hold of it and perform some resurrection ritual or dealio.... Also - Buffy's headless corpse is laying there in the mall, unlike the demons, not decomposing rapidly. But very nice - I can picture Buffy ripping threw most demons now with her buzz saw. And Vampires complaining that Slayers shouldn't be able to fly. Great job!
Review By [misterq] • Date [29 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Battle of the Gadgets" from (Current Donor)MarcusRowland
Review:
Nice!
Review By [(Current Donor)MarcusRowland] • Date [29 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Gadget's Mall Muddle" from (Current Donor)MarcusRowland
Review:
Getting nicely silly, looking forward to more.
Review By [(Current Donor)MarcusRowland] • Date [28 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Penny's Nightlife Encounter" from JediKnight
Review:
Very good job on the story so far, please add more soon.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the kind review I will definatly try to add a fourth Chapter this week.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [22 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Gadget Meets The Scoobies" from justapiranha
Review:
Ok This can be very good or can turn out very stupid, lets hope it turns out good.... because it has some good potential
Comments from author:
Indeed it does seeing as how I'm on my third chapter so far and I don't think it's jumped the shark yet. Though I am curious to know how it could turn out very stupid. What mistake would I have to make, thus avoid, in order to screw this up? :D
Review By [justapiranha] • Date [20 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Gadget Meets The Scoobies" from (Past Donor)kayley
Review:
Love the Police Academy references :)
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it, I was going to use officials from Canon, but then I decided why not add something fun. I'm not sure if this is before the Third Movie when Mauser ran his academy or at some point in the film series. And hey you gotta think, if Sunnydale PD is as bad as they say it is in the show who else could be running it then someone like Mauser? LOL
Review By [(Past Donor)kayley] • Date [20 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Gadget Meets The Scoobies" from JasonBarnett
Review:
seems to me the whole "someone stole Buffy's brain" thing should mitigate the resurrecting Buffy to a dregree. After all they'd never have found out without it.
Comments from author:
True, but Giles wouldn't think that way when first told that they planned to ressurect Buffy. Because as we all know ressurections don't work out as planned no matter what you think you know.
Review By [JasonBarnett] • Date [19 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Gadget Meets The Scoobies" from (Current Donor)MarcusRowland
Review:
Go go Slayer jetpack. Oh yeah!
Review By [(Current Donor)MarcusRowland] • Date [19 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One Brain's Gone Missing" from BlueEyedJedi
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Buffy's brain gone, I wonder will anyone notice the difference?
Review By [BlueEyedJedi] • Date [19 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One Brain's Gone Missing" from CPTSkip
Review:
Lol! Loved the last line. I hope you continue this very odd story. I find myself liking it in a very disturbing way.
Comments from author:
Ask and ye shall recieve, Chapter Two now up. Hope it'll tickle your funnybone.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [17 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One Brain's Gone Missing" from JasonBarnett
Review:
Umm, instincts are still functions of the brain.
Comments from author:
Yes, but I did say this was cracked. Plus who knows what that device of Doctor Claw's actually did, it could have just stripped all the higher reasoning functions out of Buffy's brain leaving only the pure instinctual stuff left like breathing and all that stuff. I mean we're talking about a fanfiction where Buffy has her brain stolen by cartoon characters and the laws of that cartoon are in effect. So we'll just go with the instincts for now and worry about logistics later.
Review By [JasonBarnett] • Date [17 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One Brain's Gone Missing" from (Current Donor)MarcusRowland
Review:
Oooh, someone took on my challenge!

And Inspector Gadget too! Is this the Michelle Trachenberg version of Penny? I actually have a challenge about her too

Challenge 1274: Metro City Key (BtVS / Inspector Gadget)

Not the same circumstances exactly, but that's a weird coincidence.

Greatly looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Nope sorry, although I might play around a little bit and have the scoobies think Penny looks like Dawn did when she was younger. Or in other words like the memories the monks gave them of young Dawn are. You should have seen my other attempts, both of them involved the Transformers original cartoon and Buffy's brain being stolen by Doctor Arkeville for two different reasons. The first concept involved dimensional travel and didn't really come off as very comical and I couldn't seem to get past the issue of why Arkeville used Buffy's brain to make one of the Brain Masters very well.
The second attemp was even loonier with Buffy's brain being transported into the past and used in a procedure to clone Arkeville into a female form who would become Carly, who's origins in the original G1 toon weren't 100% fleshed out. But that one got way complex and I had zombie Buffy kill Anya and try to kill Xander before running off.

Neither of them just seemed to work out right for some reason I couldn't get past the first few scenes. But by taking the Inspector Gadget approach and just going with it I got a much better story in my opinion. Always trying to mesh Transformers and Buffy isn't a good idea anyway. Though to be honest Doctor Arkeville would have been a fun character to work with. LOL Anyway glad you liked it, and now I'm going to work on Chapter Two and get Gadget and Penny to Sunnydale. (Still not sure if I want to feature Brain at all.)
Review By [(Current Donor)MarcusRowland] • Date [17 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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