Was very interesting.. thanks for letting us read.

-Tjin

Is good.

My thought about the storie as a whole.

Great story,
keep up the good work.

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Everyone has one - but some just smell worse than others.

i must admit i liked it....though you didn't stick to the details of the challange was a disapointment it was extremely minor....i hope you do a sequal where the whole scooby gang gets to meet the citzens of fair roanapur but i'm not that concerned

You had a great idea. I hope i did it justice and yes, I am working hard on a sequel. I had to find an excuse to unleash the unstoppable chambermaid.

Meh, way too many plot holes. It's pretty obvious that you didn't plan a lot more than 'oh, this crossover is going to be so cool and shit' before starting to write.

Very good, thank you for sharing. Finally, an Anime series I know. I never thought I would see a Black Lagoon, BTVS crossover and you have done a good job of setting the stage and characters. Sister Eda and Revy, each of them did seem a bit jealous if the other showed interest in someone else. Your round up of the cast was very through, Balalaika and all of those violent and scary women that seemed to make the equally violent men just part of the background in Roanapur. Your fitting of Xander and Faith into that 'verse was done very skillfully and I look forward to more of the story.

I enjoyed this story very much. Will you make a sequel, prequel, or even another BtVS/Black Lagoon Crossover?