this is a good story so far, i hope you continue it one day
Comments from author:
I really, REALLY want to. Most of what I had for it died with the massive computer crash of my second computer though, so I'm trying to rewrite it and sooooo many others. Wish me luck! :)
Damn good. Very sorry to read on your profile-page of your comp disaster. It can be heartbreaking when a comp-crash destroys stuff you've worked on for years. Hope you can get the muses working for the fics you didn't have snippets saved of as well. Keep writing great stuff.
Comments from author:
Thank you, both for the sympathy and the review. I'll do my best, but life is kicking it into a higher gear, again. Starting Tuesday, I get an almost full time client. Yaaaaay, more money, (to pay off BILLS) but less time for fun stuff. It'll all work out somehow. *g*
This is definitely one story I WANT to work on again when given the chance.
Foot massages. The pest reading over my shoulder thinks my focus makes my gender obvious. Since I wasn't trying to hide it - the pest will be ignored since she is refusing to go leave her own review - bad pest!
The interaction and action are very nicely done.
Comments from author:
LOL Tell your pest I think she's funny. *still giggling*
Thanks for the review, both of you. *vbg*
Review By [purrfus] • Date [18 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Aww...! Way to go with the positive support, John!
Comments from author:
Well, he can't point fingers when he's got a whopper of a secret himself, now can he? *chuckle* Yeah, I know, in canon he does do that, but I'm trying to make him slightly more mature. *g*
Thanks bunches for the review! :)
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [18 Mar 10] • Not Rated
One kind of sad thing is that he has a secret as big as theirs, but he can't tell them. He'd go to jail if he did, sworn to secrecy, yadda yadda. At least, not without permission. And, they'd be amazed to know he fights 'vampires' (Wraiths) also... It's too bad the 2 groups don't know about each other, they could help each other. A few slayers in Atlantis would make a big difference, while the SGA has lots of tech they could use.
Comments from author:
Yes, that IS a bit of a problem. Guess I'll have to fix it somehow. ;)
Thanks for the review! *g*
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [18 Mar 10] • Not Rated
you HAVE to keep going with this one.... i'm thinking that it's got HEAPS of...um.... potential to be a humdinger!!! (couldn't think of anything awesome enough to compare! cheers
Comments from author:
I WILL try and as a matter of fact, I'm begging Tjin to please help me rescue all my notes from the dying dinosaur computer so that I can. If not, I'll try to recreate what I had from the few handwritten notes I still have in a file somewhere.
Review By [ozseaside] • Date [18 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Nice fic so far! I really like the way you write the interraction between Faith and Sheppard. YOu have their styles pretty nailed down. I just wanna see the whole instant attraction thing explained....an ATA gene/slayer essence connection perhaps?
Comments from author:
*g* Thank you. Like I told another reviewer, just wait, I'll try to work that in. It seems I really have to now, since you guys are asking about it. *chuckle*
Review By [bucksavage] • Date [18 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Does this mean we're going to see a Council presence on Atlantis now?
Will you be touching on why they had that instantaneous 'tingle' attraction? I'm assuming it's not just the ATA gene by itself since John has been around others with the gene and never noticed a reaction like that before.
Comments from author:
No comment.
I DO have an idea for that, but I'm not sure yet how to work it in. I'll try. :)
Review By [Neverwillmini] • Date [17 Mar 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]