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Review of chapter "Epilogue" from (Recent Donor)christytrekkie
Review:
interesting
Review By [(Recent Donor)christytrekkie] • Date [10 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from SpacedCadet
Review:
I love it.

Great use of all those "Woke Up In Vegas" stories!!!
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [24 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from (Past Donor)James
Review:
Like the story. A little abreviated, but a likeable story.

I'd like to see more.

James
Review By [(Past Donor)James] • Date [22 Aug 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from londeaux
Review:
This is great. Hey I hope that Willow still like girls even though she is married to Clark. It would interesting to see her flirt with either Lois, Lana, and/or Chloe in the prequel.
Review By [londeaux] • Date [21 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from (Recent Donor)faithfan
Review:
“Hey you can’t stop there.” Dawn whines. “What happened next?”

“Nothing important, well nothing that important.” alternate Willow says.

Totally agree with Dawn here, you can't just drop a bombshell like that, then skip over it.

Unless the idea is used for another story. Like --- Author's Note: I have a prequel story called So I Married an Alien in Vegas. I hope the story of the stones will be here or you might have a lot of disappointed readers.
Comments from author:
Yes it is in my other story and like i say in my note i need a couple of days to basically dot the Is and cross the ts to bring it up to the standard needed for this site. It had a few minors errors when i was reviewing it which i hope to find the time to correct. This is what i get for writing it and leaving it to sit around gathering metaphorical dust.
Review By [(Recent Donor)faithfan] • Date [21 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from WhiteWolf
Review:
I like it.

But a comment that doesn't really has anything to do with your story. Would there be other Dawns in other realities? And would they be all Keys? Or does there only exist One Key? And the other Dawns are no Keys? Or are all the Dawns connected by one Key?

P.s. You don't have to reply to this review. These are only musing I'm amusing myself with and bothering you with them. *grin*
Comments from author:
That thought did occur to me but my view is that the Key is infinite and everywhere and can be transformed into infinite Dawns. The Key is one but many at the same time and that probably makes no sense but i needed there to be more than one Dawn for my story so I'm just making it possible for them all to be the Key. Take it as a writer's prerogative to bend the rules to fit my idea.
Review By [WhiteWolf] • Date [21 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from londeaux
Review:
This is funny. Keep the story going. Going to love to read the reactions when they meet "daddy."
Review By [londeaux] • Date [20 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from trinnaaa
Review:
Is Willow's daughter from another dimension or maybe the future? I like this story so far. I haven't read a lot of Clark/Willow pairing and I'm looking forward to see where you take this story. Please update soon.
Review By [trinnaaa] • Date [20 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from SpiralMemory
Review:
Okay, just one thing to say... absolutely adorable! You only get a 9 cause you didn't have more chapters and left me hanging :P Quite entertaining:)
Review By [SpiralMemory] • Date [20 Aug 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Recent Donor)mpop
Review:
The rest of the family, maybe?

Good story.
Review By [(Recent Donor)mpop] • Date [20 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Fyrloche
Review:
ROTFLMAO!! Spike knocked out by a little girl! Nothing else can be said, I'm laughing too hard!
Review By [Fyrloche] • Date [20 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from SamDragon
Review:
Excellent
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [20 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from oldgirllost
Review:
Just came across this. I've a guess as to whom Little Tara's father is but am awaiting the official reveal with interest.

Thanks
Review By [oldgirllost] • Date [20 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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