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Review of chapter "Lines you won't cross" from Luhh
Review:
I normally don't DO reviews for finished stores. But on this on, I'm making an exception because it's just REALLY GREAT!!! LOVED the Dawn and Giles bits. And Buffy's was just great too, you got me thinking in a story Buffy/Snape with THAT happening, I think it would be great to read a story with her walking around the castle with a big sword frightening all the kids. You should make more. Seriously. Maybe put the Scoobies with different characters from different verses, or expanding any of the shorts already here. Well, is your story so its your call, just glad I got to read it. ;*
Comments from author:
Thanks for making an exception. I don't think there's more in this from me, but I'm glad you liked what I did finish.:)
Review By [Luhh] • Date [24 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lines you won't cross" from Kaleidofox
Review:
Oh God, I love it!!!

I just wish it was longer ...and that I knew who Dawn's fiance...well, EX-fiance, was...

But I think I may have an idea. It was the whole church thing that threw me. But hey, he could just be some random guy, right?


Buffy dating men with no pants...teheheheee
Comments from author:
Thank You! *beams* Dawn's fiance was actually a random guy, but theres no reason it couldn't be any one you thought it was.
Review By [Kaleidofox] • Date [3 Sep 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lines you won't cross" from (Current Donor)Speakertocustomers
Review:
Fun, and well written, as another reviewer has said.

Two errors; in the 'Giles' one you have Olivia say that she will send a 'truck' for her stuff; she's English and so she should say "send a van". In the 'Dawn' one, in one place you use 'alter' when it should be 'altar'.
Comments from author:
Errors? But, uh, I meant to do that. *cough* Thanks for the help, corrections have already been made!
Review By [(Current Donor)Speakertocustomers] • Date [14 Jan 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Lines you won't cross" from mousemt
Review:
Those were fun and well written. Thanks for posting them.
Comments from author:
Glad you liked! Thanks for the review
Review By [mousemt] • Date [5 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "But I can't do that" from (Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
I'd do anything..... For more...


Big goofy smiles.

Blue
Comments from author:
Awww... I wish there was more. I'm such a sucker for big goofy smiles. But... that's all there is.

Thanks for the review (and the smile)
Review By [(Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [27 Sep 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Lines you won't cross" from katimaviklindzy
Review:
Adorable! I am loving it!
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [katimaviklindzy] • Date [23 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lines you won't cross" from (Past Donor)AerynSpeedleCaine
Review:
I liked it quite a lot actually. Especially the last bit of Willow and the essence of fuzzy frog butt... lol.
Review By [(Past Donor)AerynSpeedleCaine] • Date [23 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lines you won't cross" from spring
Review:
Oh this is just way beyond words. I love the second chapter the first was a bit confusing.
Comments from author:
I'm glad I added the second bit then, because I generally only write Buffy centric.

Thanks for the review
Review By [spring] • Date [21 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Lines you won't cross" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
The bits with Dawn and Giles were the best. Quite plausible :)
Comments from author:
Thank You! :)
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [21 Aug 08] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Lines you won't cross" from grundy
Review:
I enjoyed all these vignettes, but the Willow/Kennedy one is priceless. You'd think Kennedy would have known better...
Comments from author:
Really... you think *Kennedy* would know better ;) Thanks for the review
Review By [grundy] • Date [21 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lines you won't cross" from Mephisteus
Review:
*snigger* :)
Comments from author:
:)
Review By [Mephisteus] • Date [21 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lines you won't cross" from (Past Donor)Jewel
Review:
Interesting selection. I particulaly liked Giles/Olivia and Willow/Ken
Comments from author:
Thank you. Glad it appealed to you.
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [21 Aug 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Lines you won't cross" from majexek
Review:
fuzzy frog butt essence... oh that nearly killed me *G* very good.
Comments from author:
Thank you. (I'm glad it was only nearly though :)
Review By [majexek] • Date [20 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lines you won't cross" from KnightOwl
Review:
I loved the first one. Buffy not wanting to give up the broadsword and listing all of the other things she had given up or changed, that was funny. Giles and Dawn's were both sad but true to character. Xander and Willow's were both cute and funny.
Comments from author:
Thanks. And if it makes you feel any better, Giles and Dawn go on to be very happy. ;)
Review By [KnightOwl] • Date [20 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lines you won't cross" from Sarry
Review:
Aahaha, while not the like, superist thing I've ever read, it was pretty damn good. Most of 'em gave me a chuckle. Thanks for sharing. And you've got enough mad skillz, that I didn't see anything too noticable. (Mind you, I'm not too hot at grammar... Or spelling..)

Thanks for sharing! :) (I especially liked the last one!)
Comments from author:
Thank you. Glad you enjoyed!
Review By [Sarry] • Date [20 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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