Review of chapter "Lines you won't cross" from Luhh
Review:
I normally don't DO reviews for finished stores. But on this on, I'm making an exception because it's just REALLY GREAT!!! LOVED the Dawn and Giles bits. And Buffy's was just great too, you got me thinking in a story Buffy/Snape with THAT happening, I think it would be great to read a story with her walking around the castle with a big sword frightening all the kids. You should make more. Seriously. Maybe put the Scoobies with different characters from different verses, or expanding any of the shorts already here. Well, is your story so its your call, just glad I got to read it. ;*
Comments from author:
Thanks for making an exception. I don't think there's more in this from me, but I'm glad you liked what I did finish.:)
Fun, and well written, as another reviewer has said.
Two errors; in the 'Giles' one you have Olivia say that she will send a 'truck' for her stuff; she's English and so she should say "send a van". In the 'Dawn' one, in one place you use 'alter' when it should be 'altar'.
Comments from author:
Errors? But, uh, I meant to do that. *cough* Thanks for the help, corrections have already been made!
Review By [Speakertocustomers] • Date [14 Jan 09] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Lines you won't cross" from mousemt
Review:
Those were fun and well written. Thanks for posting them.
Review of chapter "Lines you won't cross" from Preaphis
Review:
*snigger* :)
Comments from author:
:)
Review By [Preaphis] • Date [21 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lines you won't cross" from Jewel
Review:
Interesting selection. I particulaly liked Giles/Olivia and Willow/Ken
Comments from author:
Thank you. Glad it appealed to you.
Review By [Jewel] • Date [21 Aug 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Lines you won't cross" from majexek
Review:
fuzzy frog butt essence... oh that nearly killed me *G* very good.
Comments from author:
Thank you. (I'm glad it was only nearly though :)
Review By [majexek] • Date [20 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lines you won't cross" from KnightOwl
Review:
I loved the first one. Buffy not wanting to give up the broadsword and listing all of the other things she had given up or changed, that was funny. Giles and Dawn's were both sad but true to character. Xander and Willow's were both cute and funny.
Comments from author:
Thanks. And if it makes you feel any better, Giles and Dawn go on to be very happy. ;)
Review By [KnightOwl] • Date [20 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Lines you won't cross" from Sarry
Review:
Aahaha, while not the like, superist thing I've ever read, it was pretty damn good. Most of 'em gave me a chuckle. Thanks for sharing. And you've got enough mad skillz, that I didn't see anything too noticable. (Mind you, I'm not too hot at grammar... Or spelling..)
Thanks for sharing! :) (I especially liked the last one!)