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Review of chapter "Start of a New Day" from BarefootXO
Review:
It's an intriguing piece of fic so far.

Just one small geography quibble.

Ethiopia is in north-eastern, Africa... Not north-western...

Jasper
Review By [BarefootXO] • Date [31 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Facade" from Dusel
Review:
This is good and should be continued.
Review By [Dusel] • Date [20 Aug 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Facade" from DireSquirrel
Review:
I know it's been over a year since you last updated this, but I just wanted to say that I enjoy it.

Thanks!
Review By [DireSquirrel] • Date [22 Mar 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Facade" from LalaithQuetzalli
Review:
Xander really has the worst luck, doesn't he?
I'm not sure but it's likely that I'm too late to ask you to pair Clark with Chloe? I'm sorry but I just love that pairing.
And I really hope Xander and the others will make justice.
How long will it take for them to discover each oher's secrets? I imagine that not long.
Will the JL be making an appearance? Just an idea. It might be interesting to see how the two groups either connect or clash.
And when exactl are you gonna upcate this.
Review By [LalaithQuetzalli] • Date [24 Jan 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Facade" from JediKnight
Review:
Good job on the update, I hope you'll add more when you can.
There was a grammar error I caught, you said "blue" when you meant "blew".
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [12 Mar 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Facade" from Elleria
Review:
Looking forward to the next bit.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [21 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Lois" from Elleria
Review:
So very muchly looking forward to the next bit.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [31 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Lois" from JediKnight
Review:
Very good job on the update. I hope you'll post more soon.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [30 Dec 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Daily Planet" from Elleria
Review:
Interesting so far. Looking forward to the next bit.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [21 Nov 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Daily Planet" from Tanydwr
Review:
Out of curiosity, where's Lana? I'm a Clois fan, full stop, but I'd love to see a scene with Buffy, Lana and Lois all together - preferably with Clark there as well! It would be hilarious. The one person who isn't paying him romantic attention = future wife. Even better if Willow or Xander spot it (since Buffy would be naturally blind since she likes him).

I loved the introduction to Lois in this chapter. Clever way of doing it, and showing that she's observant.

Oh, another suggestion! Bottle blonde jokes! Sorry. *looks shame-faced* But Lois's hair looks so much better this season now it's dark. So it might be nice to include a joke.

You moved. I feel for you. I have moved house four times, and that's not including coming to and from uni! Still, I'm glad to see you've updated.

Keep up the great work.

Lol, Tanydwr
Comments from author:
I'm going with the assumption that Lana's not around... cause well.... I hate Smallville's Lana Lang.

Lois is my favorite character to write, and I'm going to have fun with her, and you're right, Erica looks so much better as a brunette... of course, I'm male so I think Erica looks good anytime I see her...

Third time this year we've moved. In fact, I haven't finished Part 9 yet, or started on 10, but I'm going to try and get them done before Saturday.

Thanks, I'll try.

William
Review By [Tanydwr] • Date [27 Oct 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Daily Planet" from JediKnight
Review:
Good job on the update, your grammar needs a little work though. Please post more soon.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [27 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Two Alexanders" from JediKnight
Review:
Good job on the new chapter, I hope you'll be adding more to this story soon.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [1 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Two Alexanders" from Bobboky
Review:
nice... I wonder if willow could turn Lex's offer into something magically binding...
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [30 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Start of a New Day" from Bobboky
Review:
good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [24 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Start of a New Day" from Tanydwr
Review:
Ooo...

Clark and Chloe's geography isn't as up to scratch as it might be. Although you never know. Oliver might have dealt with the Egypt situation *from* Ethiopia.

Like the introduction of Kara and her barging in on Clark's shower, not to mention Buffy's hopefulness. Poor Buffy. Clois conquers all! (Have been told uni internet now working - will check when back from library - then will look for illegally uploaded 'Odyssey'!)

Am wondering if Willow was trying to avoid asking if either woman was interested in a date. Chloe's with Jimmy, but Kara might be up for some experimentation. *evil grin*

Ahh, Clark's distrust works against him. Let's face it, Lex was irredeemable by the time he faked Lana's pregnancy, but after what he did to Kara and then murdering Patty for her necklace, he was full irredeemable, good in him or not. Poor Alexander...

I wonder if the Scoobies will have different ideas though. After all, I think all of them have been evil to a certain degree at some point.

Looking forward to more.

Lol, Tanydwr
Comments from author:
I admit, I forgot that Egypt was on the African continent, but that was all me... HA.

Nope, Addis Ababa is a very intrical component of the Superman-verse, and there was a very specific reason I chose a country less than five hundred miles from Egypt for my next area... come on, if you've EVER seen Superman the Movie, you'll know why!

Addis Ababa...

sigh...

Not sure what you mean with the Clark's distrust comment, there's a myriad of things it could be, so I'm probably thinking differently than you are, but hey... it happens, as much as I think I am, I know that I'm not perfect (says this as he wipes some imaginary dirt off his shoulder)

Thanks for the review....

William
Review By [Tanydwr] • Date [24 Sep 08] • Not Rated
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