Review of chapter "Until Sunset" from bjhWaikato
I hope you go back to this one day and update, this a very good story. The writing is great and everyone in character. It would be a shame to leave this unfinished, especially as it getting to the good part.
Review By [bjhWaikato
] • Date [12 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Until Sunset" from DarthTenebrus
Good work so far, can't be easy writing Trent DeMarco into this whole bit unless you had a plan for him in the fight with Glory....been a few years since your last update so it looks like it's time to bring in the Fallen, right?
Review By [DarthTenebrus
] • Date [13 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Until Sunset" from musumenosuoh
omg, freakin awesome! can't wait for more!
Review By [musumenosuoh
] • Date [22 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Until Sunset" from calikocat
So...will there ever be more?
Edit: Awesome! ^^
Comments from author:
Don't worry, I haven't forgotten this story. Real life has just gotten pretty hectic but the next chapter is in the works. ^_^
Review By [calikocat
] • Date [14 Aug 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Until Sunset" from firedrakegirl
Amazing! i love it!
Review By [firedrakegirl
] • Date [12 May 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Until Sunset" from Methos
firstly let me say that this fic rocks... amazing read so far, love it... that said, i had to add it to my 'favorites' fic, so hope you like the artwork i did there for it :Dhttp://www.tthfanfic.org/Story-11355-129/Methos+Fanart+for+my+favorite+stories.htm
Review By [Methos
] • Date [18 Jan 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Until Sunset" from MarcusSLazarus
Firstly, sorry I didn’t review earlier; it’s been a busy couple of weeks.
Secondly, you might not have a high opinion of this chapter, but personally I rather liked it; an excellent means of tying up a few personal loose ends between the characters while sowing the seeds for future plot development.
The continued antagonism between Glory and Starscream now that Glory actually NEEDS the Decepticon to do something for her alone should make for some interesting plot twists- how long is THAT ‘alliance’ going to last before something happens to prompt one to take action against the other?-, but the fact that Barricade’s summoned other Decepticons to Earth opens up another worrying proverbial can of worms; if they don’t get more Autobots in soon, they’re going to be in SERIOUS trouble...
Plus, of course, there’s the whole Dawn/Ironhide connection to deal with; how long is Buffy going to be able to keep the Key’s identity secret with THIS kind of ‘evidence’ that there’s something different about Dawn?
On an unrelated note, the Trent scene was kind of amusing- how often does someone kill a vampire by ACCIDENT?-; any chance we’ll be seeing more in the way of long-term consequences from that area?
Hope we don’t have to wait as long for the next chapter; this story is FAR too good to be left alone for that length of time again...
Review By [MarcusSLazarus
] • Date [2 Jan 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Until Sunset" from Ansku
Good chapter :)
Review By [Ansku
] • Date [23 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Until Sunset" from Dragonelf
I am so glad you got inspired to add a new chapter to this story.
::Gives the plot bunny some Red Bean soup::
Oh, what a tangled web we weave
when first we practice to believe.
- Laurence J. Peter
Review By [Dragonelf
] • Date [23 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Until Sunset" from wickedfire
I'm not a big transformers fan but I liked this. I'm not into the OC's so I just skip the parts about them, and so far I could still follow. I hope Dawn discovers what she is soon.
Review By [wickedfire
] • Date [22 Dec 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Until Sunset" from twinsie
Yay for the update! And thanks for the e-mail. I definitely appreciated that. =)
I didn't think that you were going to be updating on the happenings of Trent and his sister, but I'm glad you did. So now he's all confused as to how he went with the stakage. I'm curious as to the prickling feeling that he's having. Does this mean he's a slayer? Or a potential? Are you putting the twist that it doesn't necessarily have to be a girl to be a slayer? That'd be kinda cool. Besides, Buffy's too big for her britches anyway. Can you tell that I'm still not liking her? Hehe.
I'm glad the Ironhide and Dawn made up. And I loved the convo between Ratchet and Anya. I think they're a match made in heaven and he's not censoring her all the time (like Xander). I've always liked how Anya speaks her mind and it always bothered me that everyone else was trying to shush her. It wasn't right. I hope you make her character stronger than it was in the show 'coz she finally showed some backbone with the last chapter you had written. What with her saying that she wasn't surprised Dawn was prone to lying since everyone else around her was doing it.
I hope you get to update soon. I would love a bit more dressing down for Buffy. Buffy bashing anyone? It would really make my Christmas. Yeah, I'm still evil. *cackles gleefully*
Happy Holidays!!! And in case you don't get to before 2010 - Happy New Year as well!
Review By [twinsie
] • Date [21 Dec 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Until Sunset" from MrMechanic
It's quite nice to see this story continued, well done, and I hope that you continue writing.
Review By [MrMechanic
] • Date [21 Dec 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Why Must Everything Suck?" from Dragonelf
I have just reread this story and I hope you will get inspired to add more chapters to it.
::Gives the plot bunny some Waldorf Salad::
Certain flaws are necessary for the
whole. It would seem strange if old
friends lacked certain quirks.
- Johann Wolfgang von Goethe
Review By [Dragonelf
] • Date [23 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Why Must Everything Suck?" from CaptainCaliene
I caught this fic on FF.net and enjoyed it there so i decided to see if you had posted it here and i was pleased to see that you had. I really look forward to the next load of chapters, the character interaction is fantastic, I remember the Transformers from th '80's and even though they changed Bumblebee's Alt mode it kept the characters to how they were then, and you have tried hard to keep them as such which can be hard.
Well done and keep up the great work.
Review By [CaptainCaliene
] • Date [5 Apr 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Why Must Everything Suck?" from anouk
I very rarely get so taken in by the stories that are Dawn centric, but yours is absolutely great. Both Buffy and Dawn have issues and both aren't perfect and make mistakes, but there is no bashing in this fic for which I'm very greatful. I'm very happy to see Dawn's emotions and reactions explored and portrayed realisticaly. No rushing in the relationship deparment or anything.
My only issue are the OCs.Their introduction didn't really sound interesting to me and I'm essesntialy skipping all their parts in the story.
Review By [anouk
] • Date [2 Feb 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]