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Review of chapter "Assignments" from Stationary
Review:
I'm so glad to see you continue the story, as such an interesting not that I just can't wait three more of it.
Review By [Stationary] • Date [5 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Assignments" from eriktheviking
Review:
An intriguing scene-setter.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [1 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Assignments" from Doodle
Review:
Excellent chapter/fic. 555/100

Looks like Illyria is coming back in Sasuke(If not, it could just be another Old One).
Review By [Doodle] • Date [20 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Assignments" from JediKnight
Review:
Very interesting story so far, please add more soon.
Who were Orochimaru's past lives?
Will you take suggestions on who else to use?
Comments from author:
I'm glad you emailed me, I've been meaning to reply to your review anyway, but it kept slipping my mind.

Anyway, Oro's past life was Voldemort, but he also got the memories of the past lives of the people whose bodies he stole, which were Dante from Fulllmetal Alchemist and the Mayor from Buffy, but I might add more later. I'm also willing to listen to suggestions, but I can't promise I'll use them since my creative process is a little odd.

As for when I'll update, the only thing I can promise is that it will come eventually, but real life can be unpredictable with my schedule. The only thing I can say is that the more reviews I get (yes, I'm a bit of a review whore), the faster I'll update since reviews motivate me. So if you can get some more people to review my story, you'll get an update faster.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [21 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Assignments" from xon
Review:
So, what, Sasuke ends up getting supplanted by Illyria or something?
Comments from author:
Don't worry, all will be revealed in due time.
Review By [xon] • Date [13 Oct 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Assignments" from BlueEyedJedi
Review:
Finally someone has linked the dork lord Moldy-Shorts with Orochimaru ( The only other Possiblity was the Mayor Wilkins of Sunnydale). But why did he attack Sasuke, is brood boy the reincarnation of Harry Potter? I thought Sasuke's past life would turn out to be Xander or Angel (That would be a a tense reunion, when Sasuke's path crossed Naruto/Buffy's path).
Comments from author:
He attacked Sasuke because he had gone insane. Essentially (I'm probably going to explain this in-story eventually) because a piece of every person he takes over gets absorbed into him. When he got his past life memories from all of them, it was sort of like an overload that made him go crazy and Sasuke just happened to be in the wrong place at the wrong time.

Anyway, thanks for reviewing.
Review By [BlueEyedJedi] • Date [13 Oct 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Remember..." from Vld
Review:
Wow, you must REALLY like Lee a lot, for making him into THE strongest one there is, Zaraki Kenpachi. Neji as Byakuya... anyone surprised here? Tenten as SoiFon? Well, she surely has the skills, but let's hope she doesn't take on SoiFon's rather cold behavior. (I love SoiFon, though.)
Hinata as Kagome? Well, I haven't either read or watched Inuyasha, so... why not? I of course recognized Kiba as Inuyasha himself, but have no bloody idea as to who Shino is. Same with Team Ten, I have no bloody idea who they could be... or from what anime.
Sakura as Willow? Well, she certainly fit the brain part. Naruto as Buffy? Seems like the sacrifice part was REALLY ingrained in him, huh?
Comments from author:
I chose Kenpachi for Lee simply because of the similarities (both have great physical strength and don't use flashy stuff like ninjutsu or kido). I really don't feel that strongly one way or the other about Rock Lee. Shino is Miroku. Team Ten are all Pokemon. I decided to do that because who in their right mind would actually use Pokemon?

Anyway, thanks for reviewing.
Review By [Vld] • Date [31 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Remember..." from Mordre
Review:
The reason the call it the Kyuubi no Youko is probably because it was called the Nine-Tailed Demon rather than the Nine-Tailed Fox. Big ugly monster and all. The fact that it had a foxy shape didn't have something to do with it.
Kinda makes sense that the slayer essence would consume the demon essence, in that regard.

Kinda interesting.
Review By [Mordre] • Date [27 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Remember..." from enderverse
Review:
It was okay, I thought turning into animals was kinda dumb though. I liked that they turned into their namesake though.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing and being honest, but I'm sorry you didn't like that part. Perhaps it'll make more sense as I expand on it.
Review By [enderverse] • Date [26 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Remember..." from Ramenth
Review:
I believe its the Kyuubi no Yoko because it's technically called the Nine Tailed Fox, not The Nine Tailed Fox Demon. Kitsune are demons/spirits by default, arent they?

Anyway; yoko fits better with the other names, IE Shukaku instead of Tanuki.
Comments from author:
Thanks for weighing in on it. The only thing I've been able to find is that yoko is an obsolete reading of the kanji for fox (狐), whereas kitsune is the modern. My guess is it's just a stylistic choice.
Review By [Ramenth] • Date [26 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Remember..." from eddie
Review:
it is Kyuubi
so far it is good
look forward to more
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing!
Review By [eddie] • Date [26 Aug 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Remember..." from Sunstar
Review:
was that last one Pokemon? I like that Naruto was a girl. The only other story i have read like this is karmic echo by ginny McAllister on fanfiction.net where Tsunade came up with it early in life it was why she drank, she was a male and a drunkard.Sakura convinced her to let her do it and was Ranma in the past life. Many of the characters past lives were very fitting. I suppose Naruto was Buffy because a slayer was the closest thing to a demon containe. Did the slayer spirit consume the Kyuubi? I look forward to wherever you go.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing.

Yes, there were Pokemon involved. As for what happened to Kyuubi, I'm saving that for the meeting with Sasuke.
Review By [Sunstar] • Date [26 Aug 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Remember..." from ShadowMaster
Review:
Not a BAD beginning but I'll need to read more before I come to a final conclusion about this. I like the fact that you are doing your best to mix in japanese words in with the english since it makes the connection to the undubbed version of Naruto much stronger. However by including so many Naruto characters you are going to have your hands full giving them equal screen time since it'd kinda cheapen their presence in the beginning if you just ignored them for the rest of the chapter. Based on the hints given you've set up some interesting past lives for the Konoha ninja that I look forward to seeing the results of. However from what I've read the only BtVS characters you've included are Willow and Buffy (Sakura as Willow and Naruto as Buffy. MAN is Naruto going to go nuts when people ask him who he was in a past life!!). As you may know I am Xander fanatic when it comes to fanfics so seeing such an awesome crossover take root with Xander not along for the ride is going to make it difficult for me to enjoy it.

Still I'll keep with it for a few more chapters just the same. Keep up the good work!! C U Later!!
Comments from author:
I appreciate your input. Naruto and Sakura will be getting a lot of the screen time, but since I won't be focusing much on the Uchiha like the manga there will be more time for the other characters. As for Xander, I'll work him in eventually.
Review By [ShadowMaster] • Date [26 Aug 08] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Remember..." from Weaver
Review:
Interesting. I've managed to identify most of the series involved, namely BtVS,Inuyasha, and Bleach, but I'm completely stumped about the last one.
Comments from author:
Thanks for being this story's first review! The last one is Pokemon. Shikamaru was a Stantler (Shika means deer), Chouji was a Butterfree (Chou means butterfly) and Ino was a Swinub (Ino means boar).
Review By [Weaver] • Date [26 Aug 08] • Not Rated
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