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Review of chapter "Not Alone" from RevDorothyL
Review:
My favorite line in this story came from the previous chapter: '“Zoë!” Mal called as he walked back inside. “Did Jayne take any grenades with him when he left?”' (So VERY much in character for Zoe, Mal, AND Jayne!).

Looking forward to reading the next episode, if you decide to pick it up again.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I try my best to keep them in character during my original parts and I'm glad, at least for the first original episode, I've managed to do so.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [8 Jun 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not Alone" from Ansku
Review:
Nice :)
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [Ansku] • Date [13 Jan 09] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Not Alone" from lorwen
Review:
still loving this story...
Comments from author:
Glad you like it.
Review By [lorwen] • Date [13 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Not Alone" from Elleria
Review:
Love this.
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [8 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Not Alone" from MichelleWinchester
Review:
Is the Glowly Lady Cordy?
Anyhow....Loved this one as much as the first one (so much so that I read them both in one VERY LONG sitting!!!! My butt and everything below is soo numb!!!!) lol
Can't wait for the next one!!!!
Comments from author:
All I'm saying right now is that Glowy Lady is a BtVS character and there is a hint as to who in this story. Glad you liked it enough to read them both straight through. I'm hoping to have the next episode started by Christmas.
Review By [MichelleWinchester] • Date [21 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not Alone" from Bobboky
Review:
good
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [14 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not Alone" from Stranger
Review:
Epic! Eagerly awaiting ep3.
Comments from author:
Thanks, hopefully you won't have to wait long.
Review By [Stranger] • Date [9 Nov 08] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Not Alone" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
I like it!

Well, not so much the assumption that Xander is Xander without DNA evidence.

That comes off as poorly done. How many humans are there and how many have looked like Xander by this point in time? Thousands!
Comments from author:
There is a reason for that. Unfortunately that reason won't be written until my post 'War Stories' episode.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [8 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not Alone" from JediLaSombra
Review:
With the way Xander's luck with women he dates goes, does it mean you're going to kill River?
Comments from author:
Kill River? I'm not that cruel. Have her try to kill Xander? That could be interesting.
Review By [JediLaSombra] • Date [8 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not Alone" from stasa
Review:
"the Glowy Lady" lol
Only Jayne....:) I'm glad that Xander is finally starting to find his place in the future, he deserves to be happy. I hope he tells the crew his story, but there is a big chance that they won't believe him...
And just who is that new evil dude? Is he the new Big Bad?
This was a fast update.... You've surprised me :)
Hope you find a way to surprise me again soon :D
Comments from author:
Ya, this was a fast one. Usually my updates are months (sometimes years) between. Fortunately my 'Lost in Serenity' muse has been insistent lately.
Review By [stasa] • Date [8 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not Alone" from ashez
Review:
Wow, that was a fast updatte. I think you meant death instead of desk here: "he would have been at his desk". Looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [ashez] • Date [8 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not Alone" from Kenshin
Review:
I'm looking forward to the next story. Hope you won't make the whole River/Xander thing too easy.^^
Comments from author:
I'll put it this way: it's going to go slower than River would like.
Review By [Kenshin] • Date [8 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not Alone" from whedoinst
Review:
Love the updates! I am glad that Jayne was able to help Xander! I love Jayne's reason of why he has to stay, "The glowy lady said so"!!! So like him too! Sorry Jayne is my favorite character out of Firefly....the story is great so far! Keep up the great work and thanks for updating!
Comments from author:
Thanks. The Tam siblings are my favourite Firefly characters, but I had a surprising amount of fun writing Jayne. So much so that he now plays a more prominent role in 'Lost in Serenity'. I even plotted an entire episode revolving around Jayne's past and exploring the character of Lily I introduced in this episode.
Review By [whedoinst] • Date [8 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not Alone" from limejuize
Review:
Yayy! I guess you can have cookies now, because you rocks and so does the update! Can't wait for more!
Comments from author:
Should have more before Christmas. And thanks for the cookies :-)
Review By [limejuize] • Date [8 Nov 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Of Primates and Rooftops" from ashez
Review:
Jeez-la-wheeze was that one heck of a cliff hanger...
Comments from author:
Glad you like it. I couldn't bring myself to be too evil though and wrote and posted the final chapter the next day.
Review By [ashez] • Date [7 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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