Aw, I would love to see more of this. I was stumbling through the challenges and thought this challenge looked cool and then saw a response. So I'm hoping you will get to write more about this. Great job!
Ohh I really am liking this! Remus as Buffy's dad I've never thought of that. It has great potential and I like how you've included Tonks into the story and her misled jealousy. I can not wait for more. Please update soon
Review By [EpicllyFree] • Date [3 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Oh this is really wonderful. This part is so very much better than the first in this series more soon please I love it. I think that it will be really funny when Tonks learns that Buffy is Lupine's daughter, it should be extremely interesting when Buffy finds out also.
Review By [spring] • Date [3 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Okay, I am totally hooked. Good job. Scoobie jerks...Urgh! Poor Buffy. Remus and Molly will help heal and nurture her though and Sirius will hrlp her laugh again no doubt. Can't wait to read more and find out the backstory.
Comments from author:
I glad that you liked the story. The background is actually explained in Stand Alone.
Review By [alexceasar] • Date [1 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Oh how sad and kind of funny that she is jealous of his daughter. I am so glad that they were able to save her. I hope they will be able to figure out what she was doing and get her to change her mind about not letting anybody in or letting anybody help her.
Comments from author:
Thank you for taking the time to comment on my story. They will get throu to her soon.
Review By [FireDragon] • Date [1 Sep 08] • Not Rated
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