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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Greywizard
Review:
Based on the complete lack of any background given us in both this and the previous story, I find the Scoobies' reactions to Dumbledore's news in complete disagreement with any of their established canon characterizations.

If you had bothered to show us even a glimpse of their disagreements or arguments about her leaving, it would have at least provided us with some minimal basis for their reactions, but you didn't, so these characters are Scoobies in name only.
Comments from author:
About the only change I made in canon is Dawn dieing instead of Buffy, so I can't really see Empty Places being much different. I can still see Buffy being asked or told to leave very easily. Nor have I seen anyone apologizing to anyone, so weather write or wrong, if Buffy goes out of her way to make sure that they hate her shortly after Chosen, then I can see them having this reaction.

The dark hair slayer I invisioned making the comment about about her getting what she deserved was Kennedy. She has never tried to hide what and how she felt about Buffy.


Plus this is from Dumbledore's perspective. Not knowing anything about what had happen could also make this seem more harsh.

I was not trying to bash them, but going with canon, they are human, with human emotions and not perfect. Xander, Willow and Giles have all shown that their emotions rule their actions just as much as they did for Buffy.

With that in mind, this is the way that I Invisioned them reacting.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [26 Sep 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gideon
Review:
I'm glad Buffy has been found and I hope she accepts their help. I also hope Tonks finds out her jealousy is misplaced!
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [22 May 13] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from bradsan
Review:
stupid Giles, stupid Scoobies. Always thinking what they want, not how Buffy feels or wants.
Love Remus as Buffy's dad and Sirius as a uncle.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [27 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Leon
Review:
Great story! Hope you decide to add the next part at some point!
Review By [Leon] • Date [31 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)GothTroubleMaker
Review:
WOW! love it!
Review By [(Recent Donor)GothTroubleMaker] • Date [16 Jul 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Kristal
Review:
Aw, I would love to see more of this. I was stumbling through the challenges and thought this challenge looked cool and then saw a response. So I'm hoping you will get to write more about this. Great job!
Review By [Kristal] • Date [6 May 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Cleo
Review:
Great Story! I would love to see you continue it!
Review By [Cleo] • Date [23 Jan 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ChloeWinchester
Review:
That was pretty good so far. I can't wait to see wait you do next.
Review By [ChloeWinchester] • Date [21 Nov 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Waverly
Review:
well done, really intriguing! please continue in this series!
Review By [Waverly] • Date [7 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from EpicllyFree
Review:
Ohh I really am liking this! Remus as Buffy's dad I've never thought of that. It has great potential and I like how you've included Tonks into the story and her misled jealousy. I can not wait for more. Please update soon
Review By [EpicllyFree] • Date [3 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from spring
Review:
Oh this is really wonderful. This part is so very much better than the first in this series more soon please I love it. I think that it will be really funny when Tonks learns that Buffy is Lupine's daughter, it should be extremely interesting when Buffy finds out also.
Review By [spring] • Date [3 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)Fritolays
Review:
I love the story so far! I can't wait to see what happens next :)
Review By [(Past Donor)Fritolays] • Date [2 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)KieriToews
Review:
I liked it. While you write anything else in this series?
Comments from author:
Yes I will, just don't know when exactly.
Review By [(Past Donor)KieriToews] • Date [2 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)GothTroubleMaker
Review:
More please?!
Comments from author:
When I get a chance to add to the series, I promise I will.
Review By [(Recent Donor)GothTroubleMaker] • Date [1 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from alexceasar
Review:
Okay, I am totally hooked. Good job. Scoobie jerks...Urgh! Poor Buffy. Remus and Molly will help heal and nurture her though and Sirius will hrlp her laugh again no doubt. Can't wait to read more and find out the backstory.
Comments from author:
I glad that you liked the story. The background is actually explained in Stand Alone.
Review By [alexceasar] • Date [1 Sep 08] • Not Rated
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