Dean and Xander hanging out and not knowing about each others supernatural stuff rocks! "any monsters that came up were just metaphors and double entendres" LOL! That makes them not knowing about each other even better!
This actually could use a sequel were they figure out those metaphors weren't really all that metaphorical ;-P
Comments from author:
I'm glad you liked it and thank you for commenting. I've actually had a number of other people make that request for a sequel, but I'm just not feeling it at the present. Feel free to give it a whorl.
I like it. Very well-written, too. :) Xander was right -- "No power on this earth" would make him tell Buffy what really happened in Oxnard at the Fabulous Ladies Night Club.
Keep up your awesome, super-cool, very brilliant and creative writing! :)
Comments from author:
That you for commenting. I'm glad you liked it.
Review By [BuffyKaibaHunt] • Date [25 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I think the part that I really enjoyed most was the guy-talk. It seemed so casual and normal. You showed the two of them in a relaxed, cheerful pose, and it just made me feel good. Thank you.