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The Last Temptation of Harvey Dent

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Review of chapter "Chapter 4 - And There's Even a 401(k)" from MsBrooklyn
Review:
Interesting premise. Could use a little more detail in the earlier chapters. Keep going. I'd like to see what you do with it.
Review By [MsBrooklyn] • Date [2 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4 - And There's Even a 401(k)" from JasonBarnett
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So he took the job without a clue what he was going into? kind of weak
Review By [JasonBarnett] • Date [2 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4 - And There's Even a 401(k)" from Dragonelf
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::Gives the plot bunny a carrot omelette::

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"A bookstore is one of the only
pieces of evidence we have that
people are still thinking."
- Jerry Seinfeld
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [2 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "And Here's The Pitch" from angrymonkey
Review:
Neat
Review By [angrymonkey] • Date [1 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "And Here's The Pitch" from Dragonelf
Review:
::Gives the plot bunny a couple of slices of carrot pie::

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Tattoo: Da plane. Da plane.
- Fantasy Island
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [1 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "And Here's The Pitch" from Mcspender
Review:
While Miss Morgan bosses have been around for a looong time, Lila surely is gonna find out that Dent has been around a longer time =P.
Cool premise, gonna track it =).

See ya!!
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [1 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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