Review of chapter "Chapter 4 - And There's Even a 401(k)" from MsBrooklyn
Review:
Interesting premise. Could use a little more detail in the earlier chapters. Keep going. I'd like to see what you do with it.
Review By [MsBrooklyn] • Date [2 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4 - And There's Even a 401(k)" from JasonBarnett
Review:
So he took the job without a clue what he was going into? kind of weak
Review By [JasonBarnett] • Date [2 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4 - And There's Even a 401(k)" from Dragonelf
Review:
::Gives the plot bunny a carrot omelette::
#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=# "A bookstore is one of the only pieces of evidence we have that people are still thinking." - Jerry Seinfeld #=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [2 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "And Here's The Pitch" from angrymonkey
Review:
Neat
Review By [angrymonkey] • Date [1 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "And Here's The Pitch" from Dragonelf
Review:
::Gives the plot bunny a couple of slices of carrot pie::
#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=# Tattoo: Da plane. Da plane. - Fantasy Island #=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#=#
Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [1 Sep 08] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "And Here's The Pitch" from Mcspender
Review:
While Miss Morgan bosses have been around for a looong time, Lila surely is gonna find out that Dent has been around a longer time =P. Cool premise, gonna track it =).
See ya!!
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [1 Sep 08] • Rating [10 out of 10]
