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Review of chapter "Saving Grace" from DesireeStorm
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So totally going with cheers of a great story and will be willing to shoot down any jeers. looking forward to the next part. Cheers!!
Review By [DesireeStorm] • Date [19 Aug 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Saving Grace" from BrownFinderth
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I liked Buffy as a cop. And happy that she and Will became lovers. Very good story!!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [1 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Saving Grace" from MarcusSLazarus
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A bit ambiguous about the idea that Buffy and Willow have had feelings for each other for THAT long without acknowledging them, but the overall plot wasn’t too bad, and the mystery of why someone was targeting Sunnydale survivors was certainly interesting even without your excellent exploration of the Scoobies’ complex post-Sunnydale personal dynamics.

However, the ending was a bit abrupt; where was Faith in the final fight?
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [17 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Saving Grace" from maxthehobbit
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I can't believe you have so few reviews, this is a great story. Your Jimmy character is just great, couldn't be better, I hope he is in the rest of this series. Wonderful plot and a surprise ending ... makes me wonder if Willow still wants to be an autopsy person or if Nekko turned her off to that career. This is not the very best story I've ever read, but for sure it's in the top five or better. Thanks for making my night pleasurable.
Thanks for sharing this terrific story.
Review By [maxthehobbit] • Date [19 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Thin White Line" from lucyferr
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“Now you’re going to be a good little homophobe and call your boss and get them to drop any and all corrective action against Detective Summers and her partner. If, in the next three hours, Buffy isn’t telling me that she and Jimmy can go back to work tomorrow, we’ll be having another conversation. Do you understand?”
.. He couldn’t bring himself to care about the wet spot growing on the crotch of his slacks.

lol! wicked!
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [22 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unusual" from lucyferr
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“House rules?”
“Yes there was a mortgage that was signed with clauses attached. I think it was section 4c. The individual in residence who receives the most pleasure for the evening has to buy the giver of said pleasure breakfast. It seems unfair, but I’m bound legally.”
“The things I do for great sex,” Willow mumbled, “Ken was right. I should have just bought a vibrator and became a hermit.”

lol
Review By [lucyferr] • Date [22 Jul 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Saving Grace" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
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I really like how you ended both the kidnapping and the story itself. Love how you did the growth of Buffy and Willow's relationship throughout your story.

Thanks for sharing!

Wispr
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [21 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fabulous Disaster" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
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Great chapter and I love the new info on the prophecy... really comes across as both very chilling and believable... in a Buffy sort of way... ;)

Nifty twist on what happen to Buffy and glad to see that lady stalker from England out of the picture.

Wispr
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [21 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Saving Grace" from batzulger
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Yay!!!! Loved it, Detective Summers is fantastic.
Review By [batzulger] • Date [20 Oct 09] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Saving Grace" from CPTSkip
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Lovely ending to a wonderfully told story. I hope there will be more stories set in this universe. The mental image of either or both Willow and Buffy as mommies just makes me giggle. I'd love to see Jimmy and Buffy in action some more. I thank you so much for this terrific story.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [20 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Fabulous Disaster" from CPTSkip
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Huh? Totally did not see Nekko as the Big Bad. Well done. Now Willow needs to whip up some big bad mojo and find the Slayers and then turn the little toad into a rat and then stomp on his evil little butt. Great story and I think I feel a climax coming on.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [13 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ground Zero" from CPTSkip
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This is one terrific story. I really like your older and "more mature" Scoobies. I so look forward to seeing how it all comes out. Thank you so much for the entertainment. Buffy and Willow do make a cute couple. Sort of like gasoline and matches. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [8 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ground Zero" from batzulger
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Your stuff is great. Don't stress about the lack of beta-ing.
Review By [batzulger] • Date [8 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ground Zero" from draconis
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Just wanted to chime-in with very glad to see the story wasn't abandoned! But, I'm going to have to re-read from beginning before editing this with an updated review.
Review By [draconis] • Date [7 Oct 09] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ground Zero" from (Recent Donor)MissingAuthor
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So very glad to see you're back and what an awesome chapter you bring with you!

Have to say that Aradia makes me wonder if she is something of a predator... taking advantage of Willow when she was so horribly hurt and confuse. Really hope she bites the big one.

You did a wonderful job in capturing the hurt and pain Buffy was going through after seeing Aradia and Willow.


Can't wait for more!

Wispr
Review By [(Recent Donor)MissingAuthor] • Date [7 Oct 09] • Not Rated
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