Interesting story!

impatiently waiting for more :)

HMMM....so i really like it and the it stopped.....can i have more....please

This had a few too many character deaths for my tastes (albeit, off scene before the story starts) but for all that it's an interesting plot and well written. I hope you'll be continuing this one.

Well, I'm a couple of months late to reading this latest update... Oh well... Sorry!!

Anyhoo, great chapter! I love Shifu going to Willow and Tara and 'telling' them what's what, at least they now know that Glory and Dawn are close.

I also *loved* Dawn's smart-ass comment to Daniel about knowing all about complicated. It was so her. Great job.

Anyways, thanks for the update, even though it took me forever to read it. :)

Oooh, I love that the Angel gang and Faith are on their way to save Dawn... And Willow and Tara? Awesome. I wonder though what Faith's Slayer dream showed? Obviously something horrible, like the rest of them dying and Glory ending the world? I also loved the bit with Shifu and I felt bad for him too. *hugs*

Anyhoo, this was a fantastic chapter... I can't wait to read more!!

I can't believe I haven't read this fic of yours yet. It's most excellent and I can't wait to see where you take it.

And don't worry about the updating thing... I'm sure I'll have an angry mob of fans with pitchforks and torches banging down my door any day now because I haven't updated since October >.

Yay, new chapter.

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Great line from Dawn, reminding Daniel that she possibly knows "complicated" even better than he does, given her own origins and the circumstances through which she came to be at the SGC. Nice as Daniel is, you can't let him fall into the habit of thinking he can patronize anyone whose weirdness isn't of the SGC variety.

Nice to see you continuing this story--- I wonder how the SGC will react to Angel, poor Sam will be trying to find a scientific explanation for vampirism. But they need at least one person able to realize that nobody can understand that Glory is Ben....

Yay, two new chapters.

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A five years old almost omnipotent ascended being... oh boy, if I didn't knew about the non interference rules, I'll say Glory is royally screwed!.
And yeah, little bro's are like that =).
Cool chapter, see ya!!!

Not much needed on technicalities. What exactly could they charge her with? There's no evidence on anything that happened in Sunnydale... there are various assault & 'escaping from the police' charges I suppose, but then again, she was a minor. For that matter, a good lawyer could point out that she'd just come out of a coma and was probably dazed & confused, then sue the hospital for not providing her with good enough services . Not to mention a municipal corruption angle--the mayor of SD was paying for her apartment, giving her play stations etc while she was a minor. Obviously he was a big pervert type preying on youth.
Anyway--- Nice to see Angel's gang spring into action. Would be fun to see Fred get into a geek-fest talk with Sam Carter & Willow over portals...

good

Great update! I love the adding of Shifu and the Dawn/Cassie interaction was great too... I think they would make awesome friends. Very bad news about Glory knowing where Willow and Tara are... It's so not of the good. *nods* lol. Hopefully Dawn stays safe.

Anyhoo, thanks for the new chapter... I look forward to reading more!!