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Review of chapter "Prompt Set 4" from Caliadragon
Review:
These prompts were fantastic and especially loved how Jack thought of the women in his life.


Thanks
Cali
Comments from author:
Thanks. I really, really loved that prompt in particular, so I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [14 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prompt Set 4" from TouchoftheWind
Review:
brilliance!
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [7 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prompt Set 3" from PrincessTai
Review:
I'm a Puckleberry fan. But there are no ways to express how right Rachel/Jesse are. I don't care what some people say. He generally cared for her. If Puckleberry is number one Jesse/Rachel are 1.2. Honestly. And I LOVED the story the minute I read the title. I saw her storm in coming. I could feel it and you delivered. It was wonderful. And his words to her, so Jesse. As well was his thoughts about sharing the world and owning it. They are both SO larger than life. You would think they would stamp all over each other, and they (he) did in teenage immaturity. But I think they have it in them to make it work. I really enjoyed seeing that in this fic.

I also loved the Damian bit. The thought process and explanation worked. I haven't read his comics but I have heard SO SO much (understatement) about the character. So it was interesting to see this insight and it seemed to fit Bruce. Poor kid. It added a sympathy that it seems that some deny him. Which gets a thumbs up.

And of course, Alistair! I enjoyed that as well.
Comments from author:
Me, too! I didn't want to like Rachel/Jesse because I knew he was jerking her around. But he was just so adorable! And conflicted! And way better than Finn! So I'm glad you liked it. I wanted to give her a Happily Ever After that was actually true to who she is.

I won't lie, I've only read a little with him in it. So maybe this is an unbiased look at his character. Because Bruce Wayne or Batman or whatever face he's wearing atm, he'd been 10 times worse on a kid that was actually his.

God, that ficlet. I don't normally do dark stuff but Alistair is just such a cheerfully evil bastard. I couldn't resist.
Review By [PrincessTai] • Date [3 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prompt Set 3" from DirectorLady
Review:
I am a diehard Puck fan and you actually made me like Rachel/Jesse. You are completely evil. Luckily, I like evil.
Comments from author:
Me, too! But the prompt! I couldn't resist! And, at first, I was going to have it be past!Rachel/Jesse, but the prompt ran away with me! *adjusts the halo that's propped up by my horns* I'm 50/50, thank you very much.
Review By [DirectorLady] • Date [3 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prompt Set 3" from Caliadragon
Review:
This set of prompts was amazing. The one with Dean and Allistar gave me chills. It was so sad and dark and perfectly Supernatural.


Thanks
Calia
Comments from author:
Thank you. I don't normally do dark! Especially, for whatever reason, Supernatural! But this one, oh I had to. (In fact, I've got an interesting BtVS noncross AU Season 4 that's a dark!fic that I've been pecking at for ages.)
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [2 Nov 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prompt Set 3" from kayron
Review:
I haven't seen a new Fast and the Furious story in a long time. I'd love to see one with a Dom and Brian pairing. If suggestions are being taken, that is the story I'd like to see.
Comments from author:
The fourth movie (admittedly awhile ago) inspired a couple of chaptered fics that I'm sussing out, but they're Dom/Letty/Brian. I don't know if I'll ever just straight up slash Dom and Brian, beyond a couple of prompts that call for it.
Review By [kayron] • Date [2 Nov 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prompt Set 3" from TouchoftheWind
Review:
OOO! Very good!
Comments from author:
THANKS!
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [2 Nov 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Man Up" from Caliadragon
Review:
These were just awesome and I loved that Artie stepped up and tried to explain Finn to Besete.


Thanks
Calia
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. See, I thought Artie made the mess, he should have to try to clean it up.
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [26 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Man Up" from TouchoftheWind
Review:
dude- Lol- awesome
Comments from author:
I am guilty of the dude thing. You know that.
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [26 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Bite Sized Prompt Set 2" from TouchoftheWind
Review:
Fantastic
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [26 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of story "Bits and Pieces" from DeeRose
Review:
I love this story, it may even be my favorite out of the bunch.

Thank you for posting.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.
Review By [DeeRose] • Date [12 Sep 10] • Not Rated • Edit Comment
Review of chapter "Bite Sized Prompt Set 1" from Caliadragon
Review:
These were fantastic! The one with Chris broke my heart though. I wanted to cry for him as I read it.


Thanks
Calia
Comments from author:
Thanks! Chris is such a woobie, I love him but I'm always mean to him. Why is that?
Review By [Caliadragon] • Date [5 Sep 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Bite Sized Prompt Set 1" from TouchoftheWind
Review:
Greatness- love how Eliot didn't want to be compared to a cheerleader and how Sirius wouldn't take off the jacket!
Comments from author:
Eliot is not the least bit peppy and Sirius just doesn't understand! Muggles wear these jackets all the time!
Review By [TouchoftheWind] • Date [5 Sep 10] • Not Rated
Review of story "Bits and Pieces" from SpacedCadet
Review:
Very nice.

I would really like to see more of this!
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.

I have a couple of ideas, so we'll probably see more before it's finished.
Review By [SpacedCadet] • Date [17 Aug 10] • Not Rated • Edit Comment
Review of story "Bits and Pieces" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written tender and poignant moment, well done.

One point I thought jail was the pen not pin?
Comments from author:
Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it.

And you might just be right. If I continue it, like I think I will, I'll be sure to change that.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [25 Jun 10] • Rating [9 out of 10] • Edit Comment
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