Review of chapter "I Just Wonder.." from
HawkehuntReview:
Just a note for any future stories: it's a little unusual to have speech all in italics. Also, if you follow the standard format, it leaves italics free to use for emphasis, rather than enclosing words in slashes.
Review By [
Hawkehunt] • Date [27 Nov 09] • Rating [5 out of 10]